In this video, we present 'PLEASE HOLD,' but this is TOO UNHINGED! Jono wrote it for Grian to use in Hermitcraft S10 under the guidance of Executive Producer SCREEN.
Enjoy the chaos! Is this more annoying than the original... or is it perfect for the permit office's waiting room?
PLEASE HOLD: • PLEASE HOLD | JONO | G...
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JONO composed music for HERMITCRAFT and now writes music for films and trailers in Los Angeles, CA.
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Is this too unhinged?
Not at all
no, it's perfect XD
no, thats the point tho, right?
Needs more cowbell
It's beautiful :))
for april fools you should release an extended version of this but one layer is like 0.000001% slower than all of the other layers so by the end of the video it just sounds horrendous
That's actually an interesting idea!
or all of the layers have different speed
Horrendous? That would be amazing. Then I wouldn't have to listen to this on a loop, and it would keep getting more and more different!
This!!
It’s probably bad that I would listen to the whole thing if that happens
Jono and Grian have us all willingly listening to hold music
Thats just how good they are
Yep it’s brilliant
Oh my god
And unnerving stuff at that.
Oh.
I need to have this ready when those spam callers bother me. They will quit their job immediately. Phenomenal. 10/10
I need this on a ringtone ngl, get out of any meeting/class/interaction just cause of it lol
I actually did this, he literally just sighed and said, "I hate you"
@@KevinArellano69r/traumatizethemback Jokes aside, do you think they had the ref ?
@@gauthiervergison6332 no idea
OOO such a good idea
We filling out MJYAAFK06 with this one 🔥🔥
PLEASE HOLD🗣🗣🔥🔥🔥🔥💯‼️💯🔥
WE GETTING PUT ON HOLD 🔥🔥🔥
WAIT A SEC- I KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS NOW! M umbo J umbo Y ou A re A F K I have ZERO idea if I’m the first person to discover this, but that’s HILARIOUS
@@HarmonyMoonbeam024 I think he pointed it out in the video he created it, but it's easy to miss. The 06 is also because it was season six that the Mumbo Jumbo you are AFK song was created
@@HarmonyMoonbeam024Grian said what it meant in one of his videos when he first filled it out lol
Mother...I won't be home for dinner tonight....
Mother...I won't ever be home again
Mother... I don't even know if I will be alive after I am phased into Permit Office Backrooms...
mother... im lost in the waiting room
Mother, the permit office man stole my appendix
mother... now he's playing some weird music... it's whistling... I can't stand it anymore! SOMEONE HELP!!!
I don't understand why Grian doesn't want to keep it, I was expecting the voices to be replaced by screams in this version...
He thinks it’s too unsettling, which I think is actually a compliment
FOR REAL! this version is better
LULU?? YO UR THE LULU THAT I USED TO JOIN RANDOM ROBLOX KZheadRS WITH?
@@ghxsthunt Hum, yes... You can guess which type of KZhead content I now watch.
@@Lulu5239 bro u wont remember me bc its been a while but I remember talking to u on discord and us joining some youtubers games, its so cool that u watch hermitcraft now. do u like the life series?
This is one of those times I wish I could animate, because I have the perfect animatic for this: Grian just vibing in the permit office (he’s the one whistling off-key while wearing headphones and sweeping up) meanwhile the song is slowly turning all the hermits into zombies, and by the end, they’re all banging on the windows of the office, and Grian, not looking at them, thinking they’re just angry hermits, puts up a sign in the window that says they’re only open on Sundays. I don’t know, I just find it really funny
I might animate this. Do I have permission for the idea?
This is so cool omg yes!
@@LEGO-CREAMtell me if u do :)
@@TennantFamilyNews your not op?
@@Zipy54 huh?
You could call it "Please Don't Hold"
Or "please leave if you dont was to lose your sanity"
"For your sake, please do not hold"
Pleasen't don't holdn't
Please Let Go
This super unhinged version is GREAT, but for the purposes its trying to serve, I feel like subtlety is _key!_ It has to sound completely normal for a while at the start, but slowly become more and more "off" as it goes on. It has to be subtle enough that they notice something is wrong, but because they've been listening to it for so long it feels like its all in their head. Then it kicks into full "unhinged mode" after a loooong time of playing, building up over time and reaching the point it is in this version.
Now I need this to be a version so I can have it on repeat
Yes! Have the "perfectly normal" bit a little longer than what it is now, and come in slower with the insanity. The whistling might also be a little much, to be honest, as it's super obvious the second it starts. Like others have said, though, adding some barely audible screams and/or knocking sounds would be awesome as well.
you should listen to 'the caretakers - everywhere at the end of time' . its a musical experiment aiming to explain the effects of dementia through music, absoutely horrifying but interesting nonetheless. has the effects of 'coming off' as you say. hope you enjoy
Keep in mind it has to be short enough for KZhead content. You wouldn't want an episode with a 15 minute version full of "wait for it, eventually they will notice"
@@-Wust- Yeah... That's fair.
I can’t stop laughing. It’s horrible. This definitely plays in the permit office backrooms.
Unironically good if you ask me
Etho saying that the permit office’s waiting room looks like a place you’d get beaten up at 😭🙏
Grian should turn that into his fight club
For real though it looks like Grian’s decked out practice room. Somebody should put a ravager down there.
Barely perceptible knocking in the background would be amazing
Out of time too
I mean this as the most genuine compliment to what you've accomplished here: it sounds like a middle school band's rendition of Please Hold, with one father in the audience who's heard it a few too many times during his kid's practice and is subconsciously whistling along (and he's a bit tune-deaf, and not that good at whistling).
this is what scar hears after an hour of waiting
I'm dying 😂
even the warden fears this man and his unhinged creations 😭😭😭
Considering that the warden uses it’s hearing to find enemies, it would probably want to either run as far away as possible or destroy whatever’s playing this music.
The warden will prob go crazy with this one and hoping the music will be gone asap
Minecraft now have to officially add this as a record and make the Warden fun away from it!
I agree. I'm scared, and my favorite animal is a dragon.
in all honesty what i'd do for a less unhinged version of this is: - remove the whistling - add more off-key notes to compensate for the above lack of whistling, including in the "singing" sections present in the original song - make it slightly slower and pitched down somewhat - make it quieter, add an echo
Sub-bass sound effects to make you want to Run leave go go run escape leave go run HIDE HIDE HIDE HIDE HIDE would be cool too!
Add faint distant whispers in the background - maybe an interlude where the music gets drowned out in reverb and horror ambience - then it stops for 5 seconds and starts playing like normal
@@dreamedwave Yes, but only in the _second_ instrumental chorus, that way you know as a fact something is wrong
I feel like the whistling should instead be made way quieter and more distant and have it very slowly fade in and become louder and louder as time goes on, and I also don't think the entire song should be quieter, because that would make it easier to ignore the unnerviness
Gods that "BRRRT" gives me a heartattack every time, because I used to have a really bad gpu back in the day that would cause my computer to hang, which meant whatever sound was currently playing got stuck in a .2s loop like that.
i used to have a pair of headphones that would do that even when no sound was playing, and now my laptop does it when it lags. super annoying when you get hanging cave sounds!
Ptsd
The super off key whistling is somehow the funniest thing in the world to me. I hope Grian keeps using this version for the waiting room.
Grian dropped the music disk and broke it and now we have this.
lore
so real
“Whoops” *crash* the disc cracked. Grian brushes it off. “It’ll be fiiine” Scar later:
We should get a 10 hour version of normal song but 25% of the songs are randomly chosen to be the unhinged version
No god pls no
Yes god pls yes
Maybe god please maybe
Yes please someone do this I need it
I am incredibly excited to watch grian drive more people insane
The permit office is nothing but an excuse to let his inner gremlin completely loose
And i love it
Joke's on Grian, I have this on loop.
H..h...howw?
why do you subject yourself to this
I knew I wasn't the only one.
@@StevenPitts who are you people
@@datechboi what is "people"?
i actually love this version so much. not even ironically i think it just scratches the itches in my brain
yes
I thought the same thing, there is something there. The whistling and offbeat parts give it some non traditional extra spice
agreed
maybe possibly add: one part where it randomly pauses for 5 seconds and then restarts from the beggining some whispering in the background some people laughing with a very deep edited voice add a man screaming but extremely high pitched put very loud stomping at the end as though a monster is walking, and make them gradually go faster until the song restarts remove the rythm jazz chords from the replies: instead of removing the rythm the song should be slihtly out of time nails on a chalkboard distant bagpipes if you listen closely, someone would be repeating "run" and "get out" knocking door effect at one point amazing grace 1922 editoin a couple dark bible verses During the pause has grain say all done, so when they come up grain can act confuse and send them down again actually please dont thats too far
better than removing the rhythm, make it just slightly out of time that it feels weird but you can't really place if it's changed.
@@navareeves8976 good idea
Umm I think even using this in a prison should be illegal. The punishment should be 1 day in prison with the thing you said or 20 years in prison. I bet people will choose 20 years if you give them a sample for 10 minutes of this. While youre at it, add some scratching sound effects too. Like the sound chalk makes when writing on board.
May i suggest: distant bagpipes!
@@eikebehrmann3493 are we inhumane?
i can't believe i willingly clicked on this video know exactly what it was
This is beyond cursed, Jono has officially embraced insanity of the Hermits he's been making music for for years, now that is epic.
Heard this in Grian’s video it’s really unhinged fitting the idea of being on hold for way too long I don’t know how you do it but you have created another masterpiece
I feel like the whistle is where it goes too far. But more of those like little glitches, and even a part where it just gets stuck like a vinyl disk player would make it even better.
i actually prefer the whistle to the glitches
Ima make my friend's ringtone this without him knowing, just to mess with him >:3
That's an amazing idea!!!
I don't know if you're hilarious or a monster when you do that.
You mad genius-
If you haven’t done it yet, make it the normal one for a while and _then_ switch it!
Okay, but imagine an animatic of this making Grian some sorta eldritch backrooms creature as this slows and speeds up. Powered and fueled by the impatience and frustration of being put on hold
Your PFP and your comment paired with this video is just so funny 😂 You've been listening to this for so long that you're starting to lose your mind and imagine Eldritch beings
biblically accurate watcher grian (evo reference moment)
Grian in like sort the lofi girl thing but it's in the backrooms and he just gets progressively more lovecraftian
The only thing needed now is the command to create a permit
This version was really unsettling to begin with, but then the whistling came in and I couldn't stop laughing. Well done!
This should be called Please Leave
When something is so horrible it wraps around back to good-- though that might even be a stretch for this monstrosity. The whistling really sells the painfulness of this. What a masterpiece in torment.
We need some random unhinged monster sounds along with a random Mumbo Jumbo you are afk deep tone
Maybe make a version that randomly cuts out, and just has an odd message, like you asking to be “let out”. Like: “Hello? Anyone there? Helloooo? Please help me? Im trapped in here! Must complete Form!!! Help! On Hold! Ahhhh! Hello? Anyone there? Get help! The Permit is a lie! Can u help me? Hellooo?
And then at the end: AAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
See the accidentals just make this real jazzy and I dig it more than the original. Might I suggest making it 15/16 meter if Grian asks for another?
Actually, follow up here, like with the intercuts your currently have, random bars of 15/16 is way funnier than the entire song
It's not unhinged - it is "advanced", almost "jazzy avant garde" :)
It reminds me of "Doki Doki Literature Club". The more you played the game- the worse it went. And so did the music with these little cracks and wrong notes. Amazing.
As a fan of the magnus archives, all I'm able to imagine now is Grian as an avatar of the spiral and this plays 24/7 in his domain
Ooh, there’s a really good fanfic series Called From The Archives, would definitely recommend it. It’s life series/hermitcraft x magnus archives
With all of the Watcher lore Grian has to be an Eye avatar
Omg his domain is just the permit office in the eyepocalypse
@@meepmonstare if I had to deal with that I would travel to the corpse roots domain just so I could finally die
If you stare long enough at the eyes, they turn red.
this feels like the start of a hermitcraft creepypasta
The only thing that would make this better is if the last three minutes got progressively slower.. and slower.. AND SLOWER. Until it was just a deep rumbling base of agony. That'd take it off the last hinge it's hanging onto methinks.
or if just one of the layers was like that
It’s even better (more unhinged) at 0.75 X speed.
You are so right oh my goodness! 😂😂😂
Oh no.... Oh no no no no no....
Oh no
oh no. send help
Oh no... It sounds even more horrible, which means it's even more perfect
We could make it even worse. Have it begin to slow down over time, and add knocking (but only in one ear for the people using stereo audio or headphones).
Oh my...it just keeps getting uh better as it goes. If there's a third version...more cowbell and off time percussion.
It’s so jarring to listen to but my gosh does it accurately reflect life in the permit office 😂
Changing the playback speed really messes this around like x2 is just panic attack levels, but x0.75 is just ominous like a slowly deteriorating clockwork music box.
I love the idea of a more subtle one, with things like the missed or wrong notes, a single small pause where the music cuts out for 5-10 seconds and then comes back on like nothing happened, maybe a slow morph into a definitively more creepy tune, a muffled thump at some point. I don't know what else... I saw someone suggest slowing it down and adding a faint knocking, which is pretty good. Grian is so perfect for this role, with the soulless eyes on his minecraft skin.
To you in the comments that recommended to change the speed on KZhead to 0.75x speed. You sir or madam, know the true definition of PAIN. LOL 😭
That would be elliotgandersen
If you put it at 0.5 speed, it's even better :D
This is giving analog horror vibes and I love it
I love the psychological horror, fits well with slow-pace and chill vibes of season10
I had to pause Grians video to come over here and say: YOU MADMAN!!!!
A few seconds in and i can already tell this is gonna be great study music Edit: i'm dropping out of college
Okay now make a 10 hour version for the normal version with just this squashed in here and there
Thanks, I hate it. (great work though!)
thats the point of the song
I don’t understand hating it, I honestly love it.
It may be TOO unhinged, but i think its hinged just enough.
Honestly, I don't even know whatvwas Grian worried about. It is perfection!
I’m not gonna be able to make it, but an animatic of Grian torturing Hermits in the backrooms to this with a few jumpscares of BigB would be funny.
This sounds like a slow descent into madness….I love it. 10/10
Every time the whistling starts I just start laughing way to hard idk why 😭
Should add a echo like it’s playing in an abandoned mall withe old faulty speakers and make its speed up and slow down
This reminds me of the escape room that Grian made for Impulse and Joel.
i like this version better, i like to have anxiety.
Definitely more unhinged than doing a 1hr version of the original wouldve been. Took me over a minute to notice anything different
You now have Grians' notice JONO!!!! He is smitten with you now!!!!
Jono's been writing music for Grian since season 7. He's responsible for a lot of his timelapse music.
@@JustAnAcorn yup... my comment was due to previous videos Jono did lamenting that Grian didn't notice him and his adoration hahahah
@@Bec-hb1ie Ah, I didn't know that, I just thought you aere commenting on how Grian is having Jono write a few songs for this season.
About as chaotic as the inside of the brain of those in the waiting room of a permit office
I dont see what grian was on about... this is great! this is most definitely not unhinged at all its a masterpiece!
Calling it rn, someone is gonna put this in a "Lo-fi Beats to study and relax to compilation" video.
I need this on spotify
I unironically enjoy this lmao
As a music theory nerd, this harmony, though chaotic, is reall neat! Not that I love the sound, but its fun to analyze.
1:56 cowbell spam starts (ya it does get too unhinged to quickly need to slow it down for reasons)
Oh my gosh…This is simultaneously the most amazing yet absolutely TERRIBLE thing I’ve ever listened to and I love it 😂 Edit: I just showed this to my younger sister and she said the whistling is Pesky Bird XDD
I want you to know that listening to this when it was revealed during the episode was the funniest thing ever I cannot get over this oh my god thank you so much
the whistle always makes me crack up for some reason😂❤
this reminds me slightly of llamas in hats, when the outro music descends into madness
I honestly prefer the not too unhinged version over this one, because this one will give anyone the goosebumps and unsettling feeling and also I can't stop laughing when I heard this on grian's video, poor joel and the future customers ( victims ) of the permit office
Unpopular opinion: the unhinged version is better than the regular version
Ngl I agree XD
@@Crazy_lil_Cookie lol
Oh my Lord. This is awful, and yet I can't stop listening. I think my brain is trying to crawl out my ears. Great job--it's perfect for the Back(waiting)rooms!
This song shows you how incredible an artist Jono is. Not only can he remix his original song, but he can make is sound so uncomfortable but it somehow still sounds good. 10/10, weirdly, I love this version.
I actually really like the whistling in the B section, I think it adds a really nice tamber
very unhinged indeed, kinda makes me wanna hear it in the everything at the end of time format
am i crazy for unironically liking this? i listened to this more than i am willing to admit.... the "unhingedness" is giving me the edge i need. this is what a soundtrack for my brain would sound like! xD
Reminds me of the music in Act 2 of DDLC, some notes being off adds to the unsetteling
you can go even further with this. i like to imagine that the permit office is litterally sucking the soul out of its users, and placing it in this music disk. needs gut-wrenching screams of its victims, but they are dialed down with an echo effect, and grian giggling/laughing hysterically
The eyes... wherever i move.... it's following me.... staring through my soul....
The whistling is my favorite part of this.
if i were to suggest anything, i think have the piece gradually get more and more out of key (like transpose some layers up and some down) rather than having the random off-key notes cause having it still be major feels far more creepy to me lol
omg- put it on double times speed- I LOVE IT-
Grian should make the Permit Office like a little haunted building, looking seemingly innocent from the outside
it's fine... ...until it's not. Not sure whether to congratulate or send my condolences brother.
ive been waiting for people to do things to this song as they had with coconut mall, glad to see its being done
If i can still sleep after i listen to this, it needs to be more unsettling. I can still sleep. The whistle should start much later, and be a lot more faint, so you think you are going insane.
I rly think grian should keep this one. Sure it’s deranged but it is the funniest sht
DON'T LISTEN TO THIS AT 0.25 SPEED I DID AND REGRET EVERYTHING
ITS TERRIFYING 😭
Me: Can we have a EATEOT? Jono: No we have a EATEOT & haunted ballrooms at home. EATEOT at home:
new "no way to go sleep while listening" song, my ears hurts so much, but whats worse i love and hate it at the same time 😂😨
I love how all of the incorrect sharps and flats make this sound so cursed. I guess music theory really does have its place lol.