IELTS Writing task 1: Pie chart lesson
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Learn how to describe Pie Charts in IELTS to receive a band 9. In this lesson you'll see:
- sample question
- step-by-step guide to write a band 9 answer
- useful vocabulary
You can find a text version of this lesson (+ online exercise) here: ielts-up.com/writing/pie-chart...
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0:30 Writing Task 1 Pie Chart Sample 1:29 Describing a pie chart 2:23 Task 1 Structure - Introduction: introduce your chart in 1 or 2 sentences - Overview: list general trends of your chart Body: Describe specific features in 2 or 3 paragraphs - Feature 1 - Feature 2 3:42 Introduction - What your chart shows - for what period of time 4:33 Paraphrased question (introduction) 5:46 - Show = illustrate = describe = represent = provide information about 7:58 Overview - Describe 2-4 key features - Do NOT write too many numbers, percentages or dates in the overview 8:34 Key features (overview) 1. search for the biggest and smallest slices 2. find which slices became bigger/smaller/didn’t change - Each of these options is fine but DON’T write both of them (You need to keep overview short) 9:15 Starts finding key features 10:19 Key features synonyms - Was the smallest segment = contributed the least to the economy = made the lowest contribution = made up the smallest part of the chart = was the least significant part of the economy - Was the largest segment = contributed the most to the economy = made the highest contribution = made up the biggest part of the chart = was the most significant part of the economy 11:16 Finished overview - Always starts overview with ‘Overall’ - Linking word: In comparison 12:59 Specific features - Should group specific features into separate paragraphs - Aim for 2-3 pharagraphs Ex: Feature 1:increase Feature 2: decrease 15:15 written (features 1) - Different expressions describing percentage of certain sector: Accounted for, Was, Made up 17:38 Features 2 - Expressions: Were at, Comprised, Almost a quester(24%) - Sectors had no change use: Remain constant - In contrast
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For reading, try to practice as much as you can, and make sure you know where you're going wrong, for me it was T/F/NG. If you see a pattern then check specific tips for that. Writing is mostly time management, so make sure you are able to complete the task within the time limit. Also try to have a flow, and a distinct structure. It's a little late to start with vocabulary so try improving on the words you already know.
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