IELTS Writing Task 1: Ace Pie Charts in Minutes
2022 ж. 8 Жел.
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In this lesson, we will show you a simple method on how to effectively write a Band 9 essay for Pie Charts.
#IELTSWriting #IELTSTask1
00:00 Welcome
00:22 Understand the Question
03:38 Understand the Data
04:34 Structure
06:05 Writing Your Introduction
08:26 Writing Your Overview
13:55 Writing Your Details Paragraphs
Thank you Chris! I was able to achieve band 7 in writing by following your teachings. I am grateful. May you be blessed with good things of life.
Wonderful!
@@Ieltsadvantage it was amazing! My first attempt at IELTS was last year August and I scored 6. I searched through to know what I did wrong, then stumbled on your videos where you analysed a band 6 essay to a band 9, and I realized my mistakes : giving a personalized examples, paraphrasing and the myth of not repeating words.
@@akindeleoyenike2296what advice could you give me??..My general ielts test is on next Friday and am totally lost concerning speaking and writing sections..🥲🥲
@@MiraMohmed believe you can do it and give it your best shot. On speaking, speak freely and fluently as you would respond to your friend if asked questions, make use of vocabularies you are sure of their usage and do not sound mechanical. As regards writing: * Understand each question types and format of answering each. *Do not stuff your essay with too many ideas, explain each idea in detail without leaving the examiner guessing, make use of large sample size example - do not give individualized example, do not use statistics, exercise a form of authority - and understand the different types of sentence structure . * Your introduction must agree with your conclusion. Meaning your conclusion is your paraphrased introduction.
oh really. i did the same he said but god did not smile with me like you haiz. anw congrats!
Thanks a lot for this. Got an 8 (L9 R8 W7 S8.5) with less than 2 days to practice! My writing improved from a 5.5 to a 7!
Could you give me any advice ??
Can you helping me in speaking? Because I m not able to got more than 5.5 every time
Plz reply me as soon as possible
@@kinomediaHd Just follow these youtube videos and try to understand the pattern :)
@@sukhdeepkaur7114 Sure, what help would you need? English is my first language so my speaking may have been high because of that though.
You are the true wizard, sir. It seems you can debunk every fraud, rumor, lie, or the so-called gurus in this industry. I hope that everyone will love you not only because of what you say but because of your honesty as well.
Thank you Chris! You are just an awesome mentor for IELTS as I have ever seen on KZhead. I have been learning lots of ideas from you to crack IELTS. Wish me good luck.🙏🙏. Respect from Nepal.
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Thank you so much,Chris. I didn't catch this type of writing task 1,but thanks to you I really understand how to deal with that.
Mr. Chris Pell is a very smart teacher and speaker of the Academic English language as well as a smart linguist in the English language. 👏👏👏👏
Thank you Chris! I have recently started learning task 1 writing fully. And I have been watching your videos for 3-4 days. They are amazing and understandable, as well as easy! My doubts went away! Thank you a lot.
this video is crystal clear and so straightforward!
This is the best IELTS channel on youtube.
Thank you Chris. I just found your channel and it is amazing !
Hello everyone. I attended my IELTS exam on December 3rd of this year. For the benefit of whoever, I'll give all the things which came on my exam here and yes, I have practiced everything with this channel so I owe a significant appreciation to Chris! Love you man. IELTS SPEAKING: Part 1: questions about geography, map, countries and hobbies. Part 2: Talk about a childhood friend you remember. Part 3: Importance of friendship, how hard it is these days to keep a friendship, teenage friendship opinion, is it good to have a lot of friends or a few genuine friends, bad company of friends. IELTS lISTENING: It was quite easy and in part 2 there was a flowchart. IELTS READING: Passage 1 & passage 3 was easy but passage 2 was hard because it contained a lot of information, years and hard words. IELTS WRITING: The summary was a comparison of two bar graphs and the essay was " some people want to invest money on public transportation like buses and trams rather than spending money on roads, to what content do you agree or disagree" So, I texted all the things I remembered. I hope this will be a great help to everyone. Pray for me so that I get my desired score. My result is on December 16. I will update my result here.
thanks
This is so kind of you good luck.
thanku smm
What band score u achieved?
What's your result
Chris, thank you so much ! With your guide I was able to get 8.0 overall. I didn't prepare for IELTS and I was really freaking out and getting anxious, then started watching your videos 7 days prior to my exam . And it worked! I'm genuinely happy that I found the right content!
Fantastic!
With this video I’m very confident that I’ll score band 7 & above and I will definitely ace the test. Thanks you so much, Gracias.
mate, i just wanted to thank you . I received my ielts score a couple weeks back, i got a 7 overall. You’re possibly the reason for it, i didn’t know what i was doing wrong till you made me figure it out. Thank you !!
Well done, Aryan! If you need our help in the future, you know where to contact us.
I truly believe this video will help me achieve higher band in my Ielts exam.
Love you from Australia Chris your teaching way is really differentiated than the others tutorial keep going !
I think your lecture is so amazing! It's very understandable. Thank you Chris!
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Awesome! I'd really loved the way you explain it.... You make it easy! I hope I'll pass the C1 exam using your techniques! ;) Thanks from Barcelona (Spain)
Hey Chris I'm an avid English language user and prepared for my IELTS in a week. I watched some of your writing and speaking videos and I scored an 8 in Writing and 7.5 in Speaking with an overall score of 8. Your videos really helped me a lot. Thank you!
Well done!
Wow! This was great to watch. Thank you very much Chris.
Thank you so much, no one could understand me like you!!❤❤
You an amazing IELTS teacher Sir Chris please keep it up
Thank you so much! Working on an assignment and was struggling. ❤
Thank you very much for your kind information about task 1. It changed my mindset about the pie charts. I hope it gonna be helpful for me while I'll practicing that charts.
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Thank you a lot,Chris.I got 6 from writing section ,however topic was quite hard for me ( it was about economic development). I didn't have enough time for preparation.I have just prepared for 2 weeks and Your videos helped me a lot You are great ...Sir, you replied my emails politely that is so invaluable ..Keep it up💗
Fantastic!
Thanks a ton for this! I'm taking the test for the first time in about 48 hrs. I struggle a lot with writing (especially task 1) . Your videos helped me ease my worries, so instructive! Hoping I get overall 6 on my first time! Update: got a 7 overall! :)
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hey, how was your test?
@@homekomilov9597 I got a band 7 overall! My university application requires overall 6 :) I’m very satisfied
Hi Chris! Your lesson is simply amazing because you explain every bit of detail,logically and intelligibly. Thanks & regards.
Glad you liked it!
Dear Chris!!! I passed my IELTS and got 7.5 band overall. W7 S7 R8.5 L8 . I wanted to thank youuu for writing classes, they were actually very helpful and so structured .
That's amazing! Congratulations! If you need help in the future, you know where we are.
@IELTS Advantage can i write writing in Capital letters all essay and
@@MuhammadShoaib-nd5vi (I'm not chris but..) you can't because that would be grammatically inaccurate. :)
Please help me how can i improve my reading and listening score
Hi Harmonione, plz answer my question. You get that score only by watching his videos or you did join class or have your own teacher? Because I wanna take an IELTS exam but don’t know how to start. Thank you
Hello!! I would just like to say thank youuuu. IELTS advantage and other channels helped me so much prepare for my test. I had 2 weeks to prepare but I’ll be honest I started really studying 3 days before my actual test lol! And by far I would have to say that Chris was the best at explaining the writing task. I was definitely the most nervous for writing but I got the score I needed :)). Overall I got 8 with S8.5, W7, R8 and L9. Keep the spirits up!! And thanks again ❤
This is amazing news! Congratulations!
@@Ieltsadvantage thanks again and keep up the good work Chris and the team!! Wishing u all the best for 2023
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Thanks a ton for your informative lectures and guidance, Sir. Learnt a lot.
I feel immensely grateful for having a tutor like you !! May God bless you sir !!
Hy have you cleared your test??
@@_sukh_901 yess
This video is really helpful! Thank you so much!!
Thank you so much mentor! You made my day & result ❤️❤️✨ Got my desired bands in second attempt. That online webinar on IELTS writing task 2 was superb. My test was on 26 November and so I had very little time but thank you for that webinar. My mindset about IELTS writing was totally wrong and thanks to that webinar, my score got improved. My scores are: Listening:8 Speaking:8 Reading:8 Writing:6.5 Overall:7.5
Great job! Thanks for sharing.
Thank you so much for your videos. I had less than four days to prepare for the test because of an emergency. I Followed your tips for writing tasks 1 and 2, and ended up with a score of 8 ✌️ Anyone reading this, don’t waste your money on generic books or study guides. This channel is a goldmine for all things IELTS.
Great job!
I have no words to thank you You are amazing
Most welcome 😊
THANK YOU sir !! I got my desired bandscores in just first attempt by watching ur videos 👍👍 May more and more students get right direction for ielts preparation from ur videos...
Congratulations!
Thank you sir. This looks simplified
Thanks you Mister Chris! For your techniques. I also achieved sufficient score just because of you. Thanks again.
Great job! Congratulations! If you need help in the future, you know where we are.
Mate, thank you for your videos. Watched a few before my test and managed to get 7,5 without almost no preparation. C1 level is very respectable level in my country (Ukraine). Also thank you for breaking few stupid stereotypes about speaking and writing. All in all thank you, and keep up with great content
Nice work!
How useful the video is. Thank you so much, teacher Chris!!!
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This is called a genuine video
Sir your videos help me alot to get motivate myself about my study because, your way of teaching as well as writing is simple whereas, other teachers teach us very difficult vocabulary therefore, whenever i watch your video i really observe that i can do this. So thanku so much sir for your guidance.😊
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Thank you so much Chris, I got desired bands because of you. Thank you so so so much. Your student from INDIA ❤️
Congratulations!
Wow So clear and understandable.tank u sir chris🙏
Hi I have to say thank you so much for creating these amazing videos I am in intermadate level and wanna to take the IELTS exam in 5 months later but I think with your videos I can do it because you go through the details and teach which strategy we have to use
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your videos are very helpful. thanks a lot
You are amazing teacher. Thanks sir🙏
Thanks,It was such an inspirational and helpful video.😍😍😍😍
You are the best tutor . Take 💖 and respect from Bangladesh.
Thank you so much for your helpful videos!
Hey Chris! Thank you so so much. Because of you, I was able to get 6.5 in writing and overall it's 7, even though I was sceptical about my level of English proficiency. People around me, who had their education in English medium, I always felt like lacking the confidence while writing, speaking or even reading out loud in English. I wasn't able to join your course membership as I couldn't afford it, but I followed all your free material provided, wrote according to that in my exam and I'm happy about the result I got. (p.s.- I prepared for this exam in a week)
This is great news. Congratulations!
Hi!! What was your band in other sections? I can't improve in speaking
@@grey-op2pc hey! It was my first attempt. I have 6.5 in speaking and writing, 6 in reading (ik it's pretty low😅) and 8 in listening. Overall it's 7
@@ghostunderyourbed1045 no you did your best !! I am happy for you. I am planning to appear in exam in coming January and I don't have any confidence on speaking part. I am afraid that what if I can't speak in the real exam.
@@grey-op2pc I actually didn't perform well in speaking. In the second section, where we have to talk for straight 2 minutes, I was able talk about a minute or half. My examiner was nodding head, indicating to talk more. Later, I started speaking irrelevant of the topic😂😂 but I had already covered all the questions given on the card. Also the topic was little hard. I had to describe a thing which I liked the most, where did I see it, how was it. It was pretty hard to recall anything at the moment but still managed. Try to talk with ease, don't take too much stress, infact, talk with them like how you talk to your friend. Don't have to use advanced vocabulary.
Thank you so much!
I'm doing IELTS in paid course but they never taught me like this 😢 thank you so much 🥰
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Extremely useful video, thanks IELTS Advantage ❤️💯
Finally,,, there is a video that solved my problem of task 1. Grateful
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so helpful! Thanks, Chris🙌🏻
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lots of love from India sir. I regularly follow your vedios. They not only gave me ideas but also boosted me with confidence. On 17 dec I have my exam. Hope I can reach my targeted band. Thank you.......
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Thanks for your kind response.Those words mean a lot..
how was your exam ?
@@k9killer that was good
@@secretlifeofdevesh7867 it's over all 7 in academic ielts
I got band 7 and 7.5 in the Essay correction service. I will book the test soon and will update you with the results. Thank you :)
Best of luck and let us know how it goes!
Thank you so much Chris.This is educative. I benefited.
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LITERALLY YOU ARE THE G.O.A.T. !!!
Thank you a million times! This video was so to the point and really helpful.
Glad it was helpful!
your valuable videos are attracting me much... Keep it up
You are a amazing teacher chris.....respect from Bangladesh... 🇧🇩🇧🇩
Thank you, Chris!!!
Hey, Chris, I am here again, thanking you and your team😇. Weeks ago I wrote a comment to one of your videos stating how you have completely transformed the way I approached IELTS essays and also mentioned about my upcoming exam. As far as I remember you kindly asked to notify you about my results once they are released. Today I got them, Alhamdulillah. Overall: 8,5 Listening: 9 Reading: 8.5 Writing: 7.5 Speaking: 8 Thank you for your help!
This is amazing! Congratulations! If you ever need our help in the future, you know where we are.
@halimanoor benmerzoug thank you, InshaAllah, you will)
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@@Ieltsadvantage I need ur help 😢
Heyy mumtoz could you please tell me what materials u used to study id be thankful
Thanks a lot sir for your valuable guidance
Excellent explanation. Although there are a lot of good teachers in Pakistan who teach ILETS but none of them teach like this they should need to teach like this or we will switch to the ILETS advantage. I have 8.5 in Lis 8 in R and 9 in Sp but writing i got 5.5 and now i am realizing why i got 5.5 in Writing everything was perfect but the position and development of ideas i was not good at them these videos not only teach me but also help me to realise where i made mistakes
I hope they start teaching like this.
You are lucky that you had the opportunity to study in English at school. And I believe that you should be thankful because many people, and I'm one of them have not studied school subjects in English, and we have started from the bottom with a shallow knowledge of this language. I don't think Pakistani teachers are required to adopt the same teaching method as IELTS is not their specialty.
@@Anas-ky8hp i m not talking about school teachers i am talking about ilets teacher school teachers are the best 1s n i m thankful to them. ilets teachers are also brilliant the way they teach listening and reading no other teacher can teach even english teachers too they teaches speaking brilliantly as well but their approach towards writing is not right and that what i said to them as well and writing is the module most students failed here thats what i am talking about otherwise pakistan ilets teacher and their ability to teach listening reading n speaking is brilliant
@@Anas-ky8hp and its not the opportunity to learn englìsh and if we are learning something in our native language thats completely fine we should proud of it. Footballers always speak in their national language such as Neymar always speak Brazilian portugese same as Jordi Alba always give interviews in Spanish and one of the greatest player Mesi never talk in foreign language always speak their own language so if i get a platform to excercise it i will definitely speak my national language but unfortunately to study in university we need to do ilets thats the case only otherwise all languages are equal so donot feel bad that u donot know about it just try to learn it not only english i like to learn spanish and mandrin and i m learning spanish and arabic too so its ur skill u can learn as many things u want in life without feeling bad about it
Thank you Mr. Chris for useful information.
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Everyone is getting band 8 and 9 in comment section 😂
While i am stuck at 6
@@gngaa1212 same here 😢
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But in real exam, moye moye😂
Thank you Chris. I learned how to do task 1 by just practicing with this video and got 7.0 in writing. So grateful. 🙏🙏
Great job! Keep it up!
Amazing !!The way you explain and teach. Thank you very much
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Greatest writing lesson ever.❤❤❤
Wow tremendous ❤
This really helped me to understand pie chart. Please do make another video in the same way, analyzing each part of the table chart. I'm struggling with choosing key features, writing overview and data organization on the table chart.
Hi there, thanks for your suggestion. In the meantime, please feel free to browse this channel for more writing videos. If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your IELTS exam, please feel free to contact us.
You are a great teacher.
Thankyou so much for today's lesson!
My pleasure!
The first video makes me note everything you teach in my book in 1 hour ( Sorry if I make some mistakes in my comment) and thank you very much Christ.
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Hello to Chris and all the workers of IELTS Advantage: I just got my score yesterday. I got an 8 ! Thank you sooo much for all the free materials. They have helped me a lot!! The writing part was especially challenging for me, but I got an 7 in writing thanks to all the videos and instructions on your website! You are truly a talented and devoted team, though I really don’t have the money for any of your VIP courses. Thanks again! Hope everything goes well in your lives!
This is amazing news. Congratulations!
Great thanks!
Thanks a lot Chris, you're doing a great job
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Thanks alot for this sir cris 🙏
Thank you sir
Thank you Chris . You were planning during your writing .Please guide me about how to plan my writings ?
Hi there! You can refer to this article on our website 'IELTS Advantage - How to Plan an IELTS Essay'. If you have any further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
Loved it 😍
Hi Chris, thank you! I got band 7 in writing by watching your videos.
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so clear and your instruction was easy to follow. I'm going to take ielts test on 19th January. prayforme
Hi Abeille, please read this article from our website 'IELTS Advantage- My IELTS test is next week, what should I do?" on what to do the week before your exam. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact us. Best of luck with your test.
Thank you! Really effective ❤
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best video ive come across so far for task 1 .
Thank you! learnt a lot from your videos. I gave my test today, cant wait for the results.
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Thank you God bless you
This is very helpful
What amazing master piece
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Love this
Thats really helpful
thank you so much now i fully understand pie charts
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amazing!!!
I really appreciate your efforts to help everyone get a good band score on Ielts Already subscribed to your channel I wish you good luck❤️
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Very good