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How to Describe a Process Diagram [IELTS Writing Task 1 Band 9 Guide]

Lilie IELTS
2024 ж. 4 Мам.
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In this video, I’m going to show you how to describe a process diagram in IELTS Writing Task 1. Here's the diagram used in this video: The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
▬ Contents of this video ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
0:00 Overview Paragraph
02:40 Details Paragraph 1
05:40 Details Paragraph 2
10:58 Introductory Paragraph
11:32 Summary

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  • The diagram displays the manufacturing process of sugar produced from sugarcane. For sugar production, the process includes seven main stages like harvesting, crushing, purifying, evaporating, separating, and finally drying and cooling takes place. The final product produced is sugar. Initially, the sugar canes are grown up to 12-18 months. Then, the harvesting is done. For the harvesting process, two methods can be used, it can be done manually or by a harvester. Then, the harvested canes are crushed through a crushing machine to extract the juice from the canes. Following this, the juice is filtered using a limestone filter. The juice is then condensed by using an evaporator where the juice turns into a syrup. Finally, the syrup is moved across a centrifuge where the sugar crystals are separated from the syrup due to the high pressure produced by the centrifuge. Lastly, the sugar crystals are dried and cooled for the final product to be formed. Therefore, the dried sugar crystals are formed.

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    • Looks good, but where is the "overall"? They need this word in there. Also, it might be the KZhead text arranging or the text was not arranged in smaller paragraphs to show clearly the introduction paragraph 1 paragraph, 2 and the overview.

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  • wow very detailed video. I was practicing this same question a few days ago, i forgot to motioned the overview.

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    • You're so welcome!💜😊

      @LilieIELTS@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

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    • Awwww, thanks for the kind words. I'll try to upload a video every week.

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  • Mam this is a suggestion for you ! Please show the steps according to the actual order. ( I mean pls provide introduction first then overview then bodypara1 body para2) that would be better☺️✨. And pls show the whole part u have written in the last part. That would be better for people to study ☺️

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      @LilieIELTS@LilieIELTS6 ай бұрын

  • Very good job! Thank you very much

    @user-vw8zz6ge7p@user-vw8zz6ge7p Жыл бұрын

  • The harvested canes are then crushed in a mill to extract the juice, which is later on purified using a limestone filter. Next, the purified juice is boiled in a evaporator to remove water, which concentrates it into a syrup.The syrup is then poured into a centrifuge where is cool and dry

    @nazatnahar2555@nazatnahar2555 Жыл бұрын

  • Thank you so much for the detailed explanation, especially for write the Overview.

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    @user-vu3vi2sr4u@user-vu3vi2sr4u2 ай бұрын

  • The flow diagram indicates how sugar is manufactured from sugar cane. We can see that the manufacturing process requires seven main steps, consisting of growing, harvesting, crushing, purifying, heating, centrifuging, and cooling. At the first step in the production of sugar, which is growing sugar cane takes 12 to 18 months. When the sugar cane becomes mature, it is the time to harvest them. It could be harvested by the farmer or agricultural automatic equipment. Next then, the harvested sugar canes are crushed by a wheel-shaped machine into juice, which is liquid. The juice is purified by a kind of special filter, which is made of limestone. After that, the purified juice is heated in an evaporator to remove the water in the juice, which becomes syrup. The sugar crystals are separated from the syrup by a centrifuge. At the final step of the process, the sugar is put in a container to wait for their drying and cooling, which is the end product.

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    • You're very welcome!😊

      @LilieIELTS@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

  • I really learnt something! Thanks!

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    @lukasbenevides7249@lukasbenevides7249 Жыл бұрын

    • You're very welcome!😊

      @LilieIELTS@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

  • Awesome🔥

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  • It is a linear process consisting of four main stages : farming, crusing,separating and drying

    @nazatnahar2555@nazatnahar2555 Жыл бұрын

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    • Wow, thank you!😊

      @LilieIELTS@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

  • thank you for this. I want to ask if one can write an overview on the process diagram task 1

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  • 100% good stuff

    @nimeshlakshitha5555@nimeshlakshitha55552 жыл бұрын

  • The first step is to grow sugar cane and it takes about 12 to 18 months for it to mature. After it has fully grown, it is harvested either manually or mechanically. The manual method involves farmers removing the leaves first and then chopping the canes, while the mechanized method uses machine to cut the canes directly

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  • The given diagram details the process of producing sugar from sugar cane. Overall, it is a linear process consisting of four main stages: farming, crushing, separating and drying. The first step is to grow sugar cane and it takes 12 to 18 months for it to mature, which is the longest stage. After it has fully grown, it is harvested either manually or mechanically. The manual process involves farmers removing the leaves first and then chopping canes, while the mechanical process uses a specialized vehicle to cut canes directly. Having been cut, the harvested canes are crushed to extract the juice, which later on is purified by using a limestone filter. Next, the purified juice is boiled in an evaporator to remove water, resulting in syrup. The syrup is then poured into a centrifuge where it is spun at a high speed to separate sugar crystals. The last stage is to dry and cool the crystals and the end product is sugar.

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    @user-ow3ls9nt7g@user-ow3ls9nt7g5 ай бұрын

  • Thank you very much ma’am for making process diagram simple for me

    @Baabi123_Dehye3@Baabi123_Dehye3 Жыл бұрын

    • Most welcome 😊

      @LilieIELTS@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

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  • helped a lot

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  • good explaination mam. but it is mentioned that the leave s are removed first. but the fact is that the leaves are not removed. it is the way of harvesting sugarcanes. the root portions are left without cutting. the sprouts will grow again. and Also by using machines, it can be seen that the root portions are left withour removing it.

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  • The diagram provides information about how sugar is manufactured from sugar canes step by step. Overall, producing sugar by sugar cane includes seven main stages which is in order of growing, harvesting, crushing, purifying, evaporator, centrifuge and drying and cooling. The first step of process is to grow sugar cane which takes around 12-18 months. After, sugar cane is harvested by either machines or human labor. Machines harvest to sugar cane directly, while farmer needs to separate leaves then cut them by appropriate tool. The next step is to crushed sugar canes into a mill and extract juice from it. In the fourth step of process is to purified juice by used limestone filter and then purified juice is sent to evaporator, which is juice turned into syrup in this phase. Then, acquired syrup is went to centrifuge that's why separated from sugar crystals. Lastly, syrup is moved across to drying and cooling machine that syrup is became sugar .

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  • Thank you❤

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  • Thank Lilie 😀

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    • Glad it was helpful!😊

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    @josinhoasmr4016@josinhoasmr40168 ай бұрын

  • Good lesson. There is another term that can be used instead of separating. Since the separating is one of the last steps and it can be used by anyone it is a good help, but "processing or extracting stage" will be probably more eloquent?

    @pantzaru@pantzaru5 ай бұрын

  • i've got my exam tomorrow but i'm learning process writings now🤣🤣🤣

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    • I laugh in writing 😂😂😂

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    • Glad you found it helpful.😊

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  • Thanks Lilie

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  • Good video

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    • Aww, thanks for the kind remarks!

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    • Congratulations!

      @LilieIELTS@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

  • The given diagram details the process of producing sugar from sugar cane. Overall, the manufacturing process of sugar cane involves seven steps. The process of sugar canes, contains many steps including growing the canes, harvesting and crushing them. We may divide work into two groups using the diagram: work done by people and work done by machines. The first step is the process of growing sugar cane, which lasts from 12 to 18 months. In the next step, the work is handled by machine and human. In the third step, the sugar canes are crushed through the machine. Juice is a product of crushing sugar canes through the machine. In the fourth step, the juice is purified through the limestone filer. In the evaporator, the heated juice becomes a syrup. In the sixth step, the centrifuge is responsible for dividing sugar crystals from syrup. Finally, the sugar crystals from the centrifuge create the sugar. In the final step, the given product-sugar is dried and cooled for its further usage.

    @monikatomic2354@monikatomic23542 жыл бұрын

    • Is this an artificial process?

      @eccedentesiast946@eccedentesiast946 Жыл бұрын

    • @@eccedentesiast946 of course it is

      @jackfrost8969@jackfrost8969 Жыл бұрын

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  • U are great

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  • soooooooo helpful!!!

    @Sun-ep8es@Sun-ep8es Жыл бұрын

    • Glad you think so and thanks for watching.😊

      @LilieIELTS@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

  • Wonderful

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    • Thank you! Cheers!😊

      @LilieIELTS@LilieIELTS10 ай бұрын

  • The fact is that she just needs 12 minutes to convey a whole writting lesson to us while I need up to 15 minutes just to think what I should write ;-;

    @nhuypham@nhuypham11 ай бұрын

  • Thanks mam❤

    @rayhanislam6305@rayhanislam6305Ай бұрын

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    • Woow, really appreciate the kind words!

      @LilieIELTS@LilieIELTS5 ай бұрын

  • thank you madam ji ❤

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