How to Write A Short Film Script

2020 ж. 19 Қар.
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This is the second video in the How to Make a Short Film mini series. This one focuses on how to write your short film script. Here are a couple beginner tips on the process for writing your first short film! We'll talk about loglines, film treatments, three act structure, Dan Harmons story circle and the importance of reading scripts.
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  • True, having an outline to explain what the film is about and keep you on track is invaluable. I really like David Lynch's approach of writing. He starts with 50 to 60 index cards for the beats of the film, then write rearranges them accordingly, then fleshes the scenes out and begins his dialog.

    @thewellvideoproductions8244@thewellvideoproductions8244 Жыл бұрын
  • first of all, your acting in those short bits is impeccable. second, i'm tryin to make my next videos a little more well-planned so your series is helping me out a lot!!

    @melissamokhtari@melissamokhtari3 жыл бұрын
    • You're too kind! Thanks for checking it out!

      @RianSpaulding@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
  • Man this is an underrated video, Such good quality :U

    @tiagoloureiro3302@tiagoloureiro33023 жыл бұрын
    • 🙏

      @RianSpaulding@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
  • The video isn’t just informative but so creative as well. Loved it

    @half.cooked.noodle8781@half.cooked.noodle87812 жыл бұрын
    • Bcoz of script

      @MdHasan-rl2ek@MdHasan-rl2ek9 ай бұрын
  • Thank you very much! I've done it before but I like watching videos like these at the beginning of the process to refresh me :)

    @amourie@amourie2 жыл бұрын
  • Absolutely CRUSHED IT with this one, bro! Straight facts, to the point, concise and super entertaining! Thank you, Rian!

    @apex305THC@apex305THC8 ай бұрын
  • You are right about the best tip. Take action! Set goals and move forward. Great video thank you.

    @mainlinetruth@mainlinetruth2 жыл бұрын
  • I am, at the ripe old age of 58, writing my first draft for my first short subject film. I appreciated learning about that "log line". It actually gave me the perfect road map to developing the idea. Thank you for this series, it'll be put to very good use when I have my final draft ready to storyboard and shoot (a no budget film, this ought to be interesting).

    @shopwornbear1171@shopwornbear117123 күн бұрын
    • How is it going?

      @Noe_@Noe_3 күн бұрын
    • @@Noe_ Slowly.. very very slowly...LOL. I'm trying to write in the character, divided into 3 other characters in order to get the concept working. So far, nothing is landing as well as I think it should be.

      @shopwornbear1171@shopwornbear11713 күн бұрын
    • @@shopwornbear1171 That's ok. Don't rush it. I will wait...

      @Noe_@Noe_3 күн бұрын
  • Love the production quality of this video Rian - we'll done!

    @djwatson@djwatson3 жыл бұрын
  • I did media studies this semester so I’ve been getting into writing and outlining short films so thank you this was really helpful and I like how you acted scenes out ahah

    @EmmaLangdon@EmmaLangdon2 жыл бұрын
  • This is my personal view, I do moving image/film in high-school. I've found that its helpful to find inspiration and learn from many people. Obviously dont copy them but have a style that is your own but also comfortable and unique it'll take sometime. But listening to professional advice especially in schools might not often be very helpful when it comes to creativity. They expect too much in a short time at times.

    @rhysmckernan9476@rhysmckernan94762 жыл бұрын
  • Man u have a lot of knowledge😍 I think I need to watch your video twice 😍🙏

    @sarathputhiyedath@sarathputhiyedath3 ай бұрын
  • Thank you sharing this. This honestly help me to figure out how to get started and stay on top of it. Now gotta hold myself accountable.

    @MrKclark1989@MrKclark198911 ай бұрын
  • You know how to have us glued, love it, very helpful

    @yvonnejemutai9786@yvonnejemutai978611 ай бұрын
  • Usually I don't like any video but this video forced me to like it because it is so underrated and hard worked

    @intellectualtheta9321@intellectualtheta93212 жыл бұрын
  • this seems like a high subscriber channel, shocked that you only have 2k. great great quality keep up the good work!

    @thomascrow1975@thomascrow19753 жыл бұрын
  • The young man there give me what I need this year. He also advised to push goals. God bless you

    @user-ls6wx5wf1e@user-ls6wx5wf1e6 ай бұрын
  • It's not about the video has so views and we should go for it but u have proven that the clear content and planning is so important for writing thanks a lot sir!

    @surajbinawade195@surajbinawade1952 жыл бұрын
  • Loving it 😍

    @amanatbrar2203@amanatbrar22033 жыл бұрын
  • This is really awesome man. Thank you for the genuine guidance.

    @taylorsmithmedia@taylorsmithmedia5 ай бұрын
  • Great video and tips Rian! thanks for sharing

    @FilmQi@FilmQi2 жыл бұрын
  • Final Draft is a must have tool for writing.

    @chefbrittan84@chefbrittan849 ай бұрын
  • Excellent production and tips!

    @thewellvideoproductions8244@thewellvideoproductions8244 Жыл бұрын
  • I wrote features before going to short scripts. Now I'm hooked on writing short scripts because it helps you get into the story quicker which I had a problem with while writing features. I'm also learning to make short films. And your videos are helpful

    @XxSEETH3RxX@XxSEETH3RxX11 ай бұрын
  • Great content! Love that you mentioned the importance of planning.

    @SoCreate@SoCreate3 жыл бұрын
    • Thanks for checking it out! 🙏

      @RianSpaulding@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
  • great video, very helpful tips. Hope to see more videos from you sir!

    @benbenson6533@benbenson65334 ай бұрын
  • Great video! I'm working on writing a short film for my junior thesis and this really helped :]

    @AftonLin@AftonLin2 жыл бұрын
  • This channel deserves to be big!

    @bhargavaboddeti2488@bhargavaboddeti24882 жыл бұрын
  • This video is amazing. I see you haven't posted in a few years. You definitely have the talent to be posting often on youtube!

    @noahdaubevalois@noahdaubevalois Жыл бұрын
  • Bro, I be binge-watching screen writing tips on youtube now for about weeks and this was the best video I saw so far! Some how I got so much chills and trust just by the way you‘re smiling and telling what you gotta tell us... love that positive energy! Keep your work on🤝🔥

    @gxdpictures@gxdpictures3 жыл бұрын
    • 🙏 Appreciate you!

      @RianSpaulding@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
    • Definitely the best and informative video. This is just what I needed. God bless you🙏🙏

      @agnesnyarkoaeshun2451@agnesnyarkoaeshun2451 Жыл бұрын
  • Great video man! Love the effort you put into making this entertaining to watch 🙌🏼

    @Sticks@Sticks2 жыл бұрын
    • npc

      @mauui8445@mauui84456 ай бұрын
  • Many thanks! Just what I needed. Crystal clear!

    @PP-rm6oe@PP-rm6oe3 жыл бұрын
    • Glad it helped!!

      @RianSpaulding@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
  • this is what I wanted. Thank you

    @elyheard685@elyheard6859 ай бұрын
  • I WANT TO WRITE A SCRIPT JUST FOR FUN BUT I DONT KNOW HOW TO START WRITING IT SO I SEARCH IT SO IT WILL HELP ME THANKS MAN!

    @no1cares403@no1cares4032 жыл бұрын
  • This is really helpful thank you !

    @i.s.5192@i.s.51922 жыл бұрын
  • Great video! Perfect balance of just getting right to the point but also entertaining. Every tip was like a clear action step, very helpful. New sub here, thank you.

    @thorpism@thorpism2 жыл бұрын
    • Appreciate it! 🙏

      @RianSpaulding@RianSpaulding2 жыл бұрын
  • I LOVE how great is your video! Creative, informative, perfectly done !

    @lowiss3804@lowiss38046 ай бұрын
    • npc

      @mauui8445@mauui84456 ай бұрын
  • This is very helpful!

    @demondoll2001@demondoll20012 ай бұрын
  • Thankyou so much sir, ...I love this

    @substancespace2380@substancespace23807 ай бұрын
  • Fantastic!

    @JoeHenkel@JoeHenkel2 жыл бұрын
  • This was a great video 👏👏👏

    @michaelangelo3098@michaelangelo30982 жыл бұрын
  • Just subscribed to support your great work. Kudos . Am now ready to write my first script as I wanna make my first short film about Rethinking Tourism

    @waridikenya@waridikenya Жыл бұрын
  • I'm being mentored to film and script-write a short film. This helped a lot

    @fggyleafexist1753@fggyleafexist17532 жыл бұрын
  • This video is really helpful

    @sibahlezembe9196@sibahlezembe91962 жыл бұрын
  • Thank u so much for sharing thi helpful video .❤

    @DannyNipProductions@DannyNipProductions2 жыл бұрын
  • Gosh I love this aspect ratio

    @thethistleboy@thethistleboy2 жыл бұрын
  • Great video man!

    @JUSTINOMALINO@JUSTINOMALINO2 жыл бұрын
  • AMAZING VIDEO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    @bwoods245@bwoods245Ай бұрын
  • Thank you for this video, I am in my MFA film and we are wrting our first script. I appreciate your humor and creative expression! thank you

    @itsavannahsunshine1721@itsavannahsunshine17212 жыл бұрын
    • OMG the not so quick cup of coffee just made me crack up

      @itsavannahsunshine1721@itsavannahsunshine17212 жыл бұрын
  • Great video Rian! Loved this, thank you :D

    @creativejuicewithoutpulp@creativejuicewithoutpulp2 жыл бұрын
    • Thanks for checking it out!

      @RianSpaulding@RianSpaulding2 жыл бұрын
  • Awesome video, I just subscribed! Make moreeee!

    @nolanmolt@nolanmolt2 жыл бұрын
  • Amazing high quality video. Thank you. It helped me alot.

    @RayAdamsCanada@RayAdamsCanada2 жыл бұрын
    • 🙏

      @RianSpaulding@RianSpaulding2 жыл бұрын
  • Great video!

    @VioletEmerald@VioletEmerald2 ай бұрын
  • Really good stuff

    @jengamoyo6559@jengamoyo65593 жыл бұрын
  • suuuper helpfull thanks!

    @louisgahide9840@louisgahide9840 Жыл бұрын
  • how do you only have 5000 subs. you deserve way more than that.

    @zeyellowtiger4133@zeyellowtiger4133 Жыл бұрын
  • hey man, as i see last video is 1 year ago, why did you stop. this video helped me so much thanks, carry on

    @abraamlincoln4098@abraamlincoln40982 жыл бұрын
  • Loved these tips. First, I agree with you, sitting down with your screenwriting software is not a good first step. Second, though my writing approach is very different, the flash card method definitively works! Third, Loglines, Synopsis and Treatments are a must, but I feel like at the beginning when you are still figuring out the story, you don't know all the key aspects to fill those out. What I do is set up a playlist or a specific source of inspiration that helps me get into the mood / universe of the story and I begin by writing the first ideas that come to mind in a notebook. I try to do this consistenly for a few days and then retype what I wrote on the screenwriting software without changing anything. I repeat this process until I have a decent rough draft. Last, asking for feedback from strangers and friends is very valuable to spot the necessary changes quickly.

    @gabrielacanto1771@gabrielacanto17713 ай бұрын
  • I like your "I'll wait". Made me like, even though I was just looking for an alpha crash course on scriptwriting😂😂😂

    @story_teacup@story_teacup11 ай бұрын
  • Thanks for this video, it really helps me out!

    @Triflow@Triflow3 жыл бұрын
    • Glad to hear it!!

      @RianSpaulding@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
  • This is super good! You're a super underrated youtuber, hope you get a well-deserved 1M or more! :D

    @DiamondBeyblade@DiamondBeyblade2 жыл бұрын
    • 🙏

      @RianSpaulding@RianSpaulding2 жыл бұрын
    • @@RianSpaulding Oh yeah, using this video's basic 'outline' I guess I can say, I've written 3 scripts for 3 different short films I am going to make. They turned out really great, so thanks for the information and help!!!

      @DiamondBeyblade@DiamondBeyblade2 жыл бұрын
  • very well explained, thank you so much

    @izyschuwi@izyschuwi8 ай бұрын
    • npc

      @mauui8445@mauui84456 ай бұрын
  • Thanks for this

    @fauzianalwoga1002@fauzianalwoga1002 Жыл бұрын
  • Thank you!

    @jaelvictoria5771@jaelvictoria57712 жыл бұрын
  • excellent!!! Thank you

    @fearlessenglish1170@fearlessenglish11706 ай бұрын
  • crazy how I started watching u for SF content, but now I happen to be trying to get started in writing a series. Do u have any advice on writing scripts for a whole series? Maybe with the goal of getting it in the hands of Netflix... Lofty goals are better than no goals lol

    @renahaswah7092@renahaswah70923 жыл бұрын
  • Great video, the first thing I loved was your honesty. "I am not a professional writer" Helpful, Thank you.

    @KimDaKreative@KimDaKreative2 ай бұрын
  • I love this! Also, don’t forget to draw a storyboard

    @Christian_Girl1214@Christian_Girl12143 ай бұрын
  • Very helpful, thank you!

    @thewellvideoproductions8244@thewellvideoproductions82443 жыл бұрын
    • Awesome! Glad I could help!

      @RianSpaulding@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
  • Thanks bro❤

    @mohammadrezashafiei2898@mohammadrezashafiei28984 ай бұрын
  • REALLY GODDAMN UNDERRATED CHANNEL

    @bilalemin4125@bilalemin41258 ай бұрын
  • Great watch, i appreciate you

    @armonrichardson8402@armonrichardson84022 жыл бұрын
    • 🙏

      @RianSpaulding@RianSpaulding2 жыл бұрын
  • Very very underrated video. This is very useful, informative.

    @dddlll1614@dddlll16143 жыл бұрын
    • Appreciate it!

      @RianSpaulding@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
  • Really cinematic introduction, and quality info! I wish I could hit up a coffeeshop and write a script 😢

    @mariannedemirdji3082@mariannedemirdji30823 жыл бұрын
    • 🙏 Hopefully soon!!

      @RianSpaulding@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
  • Can you do more San Francisco neighborhood tours or just SF related videos?

    @user-xo2sf4gy1o@user-xo2sf4gy1o3 жыл бұрын
  • This made more sense then any other video I’ve seen

    @doodlecatuwu7470@doodlecatuwu74702 жыл бұрын
    • 🙏

      @RianSpaulding@RianSpaulding2 жыл бұрын
  • Man your video as really helped me a lot

    @mogmajor6880@mogmajor68802 жыл бұрын
    • 👍🏻 Glad to hear it!

      @RianSpaulding@RianSpaulding2 жыл бұрын
  • This really helped me out!!

    @NINEKEYZ@NINEKEYZ3 жыл бұрын
    • Love to hear it!

      @RianSpaulding@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
  • I love when he said "and you are finally ready to sit down, and open up that laptop and start writing...... (smile) DONT DO IT."

    @arshiabasit434@arshiabasit4342 жыл бұрын
  • thanks!!

    @patin__@patin__2 ай бұрын
  • I would advise making a short film as close to a silent film as possible, to design it so visuals alone tell the story. If you only have 5 minutes you don't want to clutter it up with dialogue.

    @gianthills@gianthills Жыл бұрын
  • Nice one👍👍👍

    @98nfp@98nfp Жыл бұрын
  • Thanks 🙏

    @haronwhere3485@haronwhere3485 Жыл бұрын
  • Thank you 😊 💓 ☺ 💗 💛 💖 😊

    @francampbell4153@francampbell41532 жыл бұрын
  • Movie with great components.

    @SerapioSergiovich@SerapioSergiovich2 жыл бұрын
  • Taking the time to outline or plan will always ease the anxiety of writing and life in general😆

    @storypathy@storypathy Жыл бұрын
  • Great Video

    @jdtarik@jdtarik2 жыл бұрын
  • Thanks a lot

    @amasnow@amasnow Жыл бұрын
  • Man you're awesome!

    @poorvikgowda5794@poorvikgowda57943 жыл бұрын
    • 🙏

      @RianSpaulding@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
  • Thanks

    @happiekidonetwo2529@happiekidonetwo2529 Жыл бұрын
  • Well explained. I just subscribed 😊 and hit the bell 🔔 ding dong

    @TrophyCityFootball@TrophyCityFootball9 ай бұрын
  • Thanks... Good info, just looking to create a movie.... I have the video end of it ready... its the story and script I need now... I have started and am up to Scene 18... But now I am rethinking the whole thing!!! Is this normal... I mean its hours of work, and now I want to go a different direction, I knew that it would evolve, but now a whole different scenario is in my head and messing with the original idea.. So at a deadlock it would seem...lol

    @skyoneproductions1224@skyoneproductions12242 жыл бұрын
  • Nice job

    @ganeshrokaya5304@ganeshrokaya53042 жыл бұрын
  • Hello, you Said that this is the Second video of the series, please can you put a link for the first one? thanks

    @shamgates1253@shamgates1253 Жыл бұрын
  • I like writing stories but struggling to put them together as a film. Currently studying film and media studies to become a filmmaker

    @Grandcineaste@Grandcineaste Жыл бұрын
  • Nice insight man

    @billpexal@billpexal2 жыл бұрын
    • 🙏

      @RianSpaulding@RianSpaulding2 жыл бұрын
  • Good Stuff

    @JakeMazurski@JakeMazurski2 жыл бұрын
  • Niceeeeeeeee 👏👏👏

    @KellyLamberttv@KellyLamberttv3 жыл бұрын
    • Appreciate it! 👍👍

      @RianSpaulding@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
  • I actually plan on writing a two-hour short film called "Garfield" which is based on the orange cat of the same name. It is a slow-burn horror short in the same vain of Hereditary, Midsommar, The Witch, The Lighthouse.... You get the idea. I plan on selling the short film script to A24 films and getting it Shown at the Sundance Film Festival and I personally hope that the film will win and get produced by Sundance before getting a theatrical release and a KZhead release too.

    @dominickrouser8124@dominickrouser812411 ай бұрын
    • Two-hour short film?

      @nsungemakonda@nsungemakonda9 ай бұрын
    • I thought the same thing..@@nsungemakonda

      @apex305THC@apex305THC8 ай бұрын
  • Best thing you can do it type it up. Then redraft. Easier to see it as a whole thing and get the ideas out there. The process is a lot easier

    @JJMcgechan@JJMcgechan3 ай бұрын
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