How to Write A Short Film Script
This is the second video in the How to Make a Short Film mini series. This one focuses on how to write your short film script. Here are a couple beginner tips on the process for writing your first short film! We'll talk about loglines, film treatments, three act structure, Dan Harmons story circle and the importance of reading scripts.
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True, having an outline to explain what the film is about and keep you on track is invaluable. I really like David Lynch's approach of writing. He starts with 50 to 60 index cards for the beats of the film, then write rearranges them accordingly, then fleshes the scenes out and begins his dialog.
first of all, your acting in those short bits is impeccable. second, i'm tryin to make my next videos a little more well-planned so your series is helping me out a lot!!
You're too kind! Thanks for checking it out!
Man this is an underrated video, Such good quality :U
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The video isn’t just informative but so creative as well. Loved it
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Thank you very much! I've done it before but I like watching videos like these at the beginning of the process to refresh me :)
Absolutely CRUSHED IT with this one, bro! Straight facts, to the point, concise and super entertaining! Thank you, Rian!
You are right about the best tip. Take action! Set goals and move forward. Great video thank you.
I am, at the ripe old age of 58, writing my first draft for my first short subject film. I appreciated learning about that "log line". It actually gave me the perfect road map to developing the idea. Thank you for this series, it'll be put to very good use when I have my final draft ready to storyboard and shoot (a no budget film, this ought to be interesting).
How is it going?
@@Noe_ Slowly.. very very slowly...LOL. I'm trying to write in the character, divided into 3 other characters in order to get the concept working. So far, nothing is landing as well as I think it should be.
@@shopwornbear1171 That's ok. Don't rush it. I will wait...
Love the production quality of this video Rian - we'll done!
I did media studies this semester so I’ve been getting into writing and outlining short films so thank you this was really helpful and I like how you acted scenes out ahah
This is my personal view, I do moving image/film in high-school. I've found that its helpful to find inspiration and learn from many people. Obviously dont copy them but have a style that is your own but also comfortable and unique it'll take sometime. But listening to professional advice especially in schools might not often be very helpful when it comes to creativity. They expect too much in a short time at times.
Man u have a lot of knowledge😍 I think I need to watch your video twice 😍🙏
Thank you sharing this. This honestly help me to figure out how to get started and stay on top of it. Now gotta hold myself accountable.
You know how to have us glued, love it, very helpful
Usually I don't like any video but this video forced me to like it because it is so underrated and hard worked
this seems like a high subscriber channel, shocked that you only have 2k. great great quality keep up the good work!
The young man there give me what I need this year. He also advised to push goals. God bless you
It's not about the video has so views and we should go for it but u have proven that the clear content and planning is so important for writing thanks a lot sir!
Loving it 😍
This is really awesome man. Thank you for the genuine guidance.
Great video and tips Rian! thanks for sharing
Final Draft is a must have tool for writing.
Excellent production and tips!
I wrote features before going to short scripts. Now I'm hooked on writing short scripts because it helps you get into the story quicker which I had a problem with while writing features. I'm also learning to make short films. And your videos are helpful
Great content! Love that you mentioned the importance of planning.
Thanks for checking it out! 🙏
great video, very helpful tips. Hope to see more videos from you sir!
Great video! I'm working on writing a short film for my junior thesis and this really helped :]
This channel deserves to be big!
This video is amazing. I see you haven't posted in a few years. You definitely have the talent to be posting often on youtube!
Bro, I be binge-watching screen writing tips on youtube now for about weeks and this was the best video I saw so far! Some how I got so much chills and trust just by the way you‘re smiling and telling what you gotta tell us... love that positive energy! Keep your work on🤝🔥
🙏 Appreciate you!
Definitely the best and informative video. This is just what I needed. God bless you🙏🙏
Great video man! Love the effort you put into making this entertaining to watch 🙌🏼
npc
Many thanks! Just what I needed. Crystal clear!
Glad it helped!!
this is what I wanted. Thank you
I WANT TO WRITE A SCRIPT JUST FOR FUN BUT I DONT KNOW HOW TO START WRITING IT SO I SEARCH IT SO IT WILL HELP ME THANKS MAN!
This is really helpful thank you !
Great video! Perfect balance of just getting right to the point but also entertaining. Every tip was like a clear action step, very helpful. New sub here, thank you.
Appreciate it! 🙏
I LOVE how great is your video! Creative, informative, perfectly done !
npc
This is very helpful!
Thankyou so much sir, ...I love this
Fantastic!
This was a great video 👏👏👏
Just subscribed to support your great work. Kudos . Am now ready to write my first script as I wanna make my first short film about Rethinking Tourism
I'm being mentored to film and script-write a short film. This helped a lot
This video is really helpful
Thank u so much for sharing thi helpful video .❤
Gosh I love this aspect ratio
Great video man!
AMAZING VIDEO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you for this video, I am in my MFA film and we are wrting our first script. I appreciate your humor and creative expression! thank you
OMG the not so quick cup of coffee just made me crack up
Great video Rian! Loved this, thank you :D
Thanks for checking it out!
Awesome video, I just subscribed! Make moreeee!
Amazing high quality video. Thank you. It helped me alot.
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Great video!
Really good stuff
suuuper helpfull thanks!
how do you only have 5000 subs. you deserve way more than that.
hey man, as i see last video is 1 year ago, why did you stop. this video helped me so much thanks, carry on
Loved these tips. First, I agree with you, sitting down with your screenwriting software is not a good first step. Second, though my writing approach is very different, the flash card method definitively works! Third, Loglines, Synopsis and Treatments are a must, but I feel like at the beginning when you are still figuring out the story, you don't know all the key aspects to fill those out. What I do is set up a playlist or a specific source of inspiration that helps me get into the mood / universe of the story and I begin by writing the first ideas that come to mind in a notebook. I try to do this consistenly for a few days and then retype what I wrote on the screenwriting software without changing anything. I repeat this process until I have a decent rough draft. Last, asking for feedback from strangers and friends is very valuable to spot the necessary changes quickly.
I like your "I'll wait". Made me like, even though I was just looking for an alpha crash course on scriptwriting😂😂😂
Thanks for this video, it really helps me out!
Glad to hear it!!
This is super good! You're a super underrated youtuber, hope you get a well-deserved 1M or more! :D
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@@RianSpaulding Oh yeah, using this video's basic 'outline' I guess I can say, I've written 3 scripts for 3 different short films I am going to make. They turned out really great, so thanks for the information and help!!!
very well explained, thank you so much
npc
Thanks for this
Thank you!
excellent!!! Thank you
crazy how I started watching u for SF content, but now I happen to be trying to get started in writing a series. Do u have any advice on writing scripts for a whole series? Maybe with the goal of getting it in the hands of Netflix... Lofty goals are better than no goals lol
Great video, the first thing I loved was your honesty. "I am not a professional writer" Helpful, Thank you.
I love this! Also, don’t forget to draw a storyboard
Very helpful, thank you!
Awesome! Glad I could help!
Thanks bro❤
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Great watch, i appreciate you
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Very very underrated video. This is very useful, informative.
Appreciate it!
Really cinematic introduction, and quality info! I wish I could hit up a coffeeshop and write a script 😢
🙏 Hopefully soon!!
Can you do more San Francisco neighborhood tours or just SF related videos?
This made more sense then any other video I’ve seen
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Man your video as really helped me a lot
👍🏻 Glad to hear it!
This really helped me out!!
Love to hear it!
I love when he said "and you are finally ready to sit down, and open up that laptop and start writing...... (smile) DONT DO IT."
thanks!!
I would advise making a short film as close to a silent film as possible, to design it so visuals alone tell the story. If you only have 5 minutes you don't want to clutter it up with dialogue.
Nice one👍👍👍
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Thank you 😊 💓 ☺ 💗 💛 💖 😊
Movie with great components.
Taking the time to outline or plan will always ease the anxiety of writing and life in general😆
Great Video
Thanks a lot
Man you're awesome!
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Thanks
Well explained. I just subscribed 😊 and hit the bell 🔔 ding dong
Thanks... Good info, just looking to create a movie.... I have the video end of it ready... its the story and script I need now... I have started and am up to Scene 18... But now I am rethinking the whole thing!!! Is this normal... I mean its hours of work, and now I want to go a different direction, I knew that it would evolve, but now a whole different scenario is in my head and messing with the original idea.. So at a deadlock it would seem...lol
Nice job
Hello, you Said that this is the Second video of the series, please can you put a link for the first one? thanks
I like writing stories but struggling to put them together as a film. Currently studying film and media studies to become a filmmaker
Nice insight man
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Good Stuff
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I actually plan on writing a two-hour short film called "Garfield" which is based on the orange cat of the same name. It is a slow-burn horror short in the same vain of Hereditary, Midsommar, The Witch, The Lighthouse.... You get the idea. I plan on selling the short film script to A24 films and getting it Shown at the Sundance Film Festival and I personally hope that the film will win and get produced by Sundance before getting a theatrical release and a KZhead release too.
Two-hour short film?
I thought the same thing..@@nsungemakonda
Best thing you can do it type it up. Then redraft. Easier to see it as a whole thing and get the ideas out there. The process is a lot easier