Fast Drafting Tips! | What is a Zero Draft?

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What is a zero draft? How do writers use them and how can you get in on it?
Related, how do you better dirty draft/fast draft? I'm sharing tips and tricks for drafting faster and pushing through to a zero or first draft quickly and efficiently.
00:00 What are zero drafts?
05:26 Why you might want to fast draft
07:33 Fast drafting tips
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  • First part of the video is defining zero drafts, and then fast drafting section is: 05:26 Why you might want to fast draft 07:33 Fast drafting tips

    @AlexaDonne@AlexaDonne3 жыл бұрын
    • This video was very helpful for useful tips! Just great content!

      @yasman2008@yasman20083 жыл бұрын
    • So does messy story notes count as Zero drafts?

      @gargigolhar2886@gargigolhar28862 жыл бұрын
    • I did a quick write yesterday just to see if a new idea I have has enough steam (I can usually tell by how many words I can get in a single scene before I run out of juice and how hard I had to work that scene to get there), and OML... The idea is great; the scene, however, makes my head hurt, and normally I'd get stuck for weeks trying to fix the white room syndrome, the context issues, the places where there are info dumps or not enough information, etc, until I burn myself out before I've even gotten started yet, but then I found this video and it's like it gave me permission to write however horribly I need to in order to get the story on the page - it's not like that first draft is going straight from the computer to the publisher, nobody but you is going to see it, so why should it matter? Perfectionism is for later, when you plan for other people to see the pages. Thank you so, so much for this freedom. I've been so obsessed with listening to my inner editor recently that, over the years, I forgot what my inner writer even sounded like, and I feel so much better.

      @v.r.hodgdon@v.r.hodgdon Жыл бұрын
    • I write short stories for fun. Sometimes my zero draft is brilliant, and I can't refine it without losing the magic. Then I read Pulp by Bukowski and it helps me fly again. That is the power of having a muse.

      @velvetbees@velvetbees11 ай бұрын
  • I'm a zero drafter. I usually define it for other people as a glorified outline with dialogue and action tags. LOL. I'm a discovery writer, so it's basically just jumping in and swimming until it's done. And it usually changes a LOT when I get into revisions/rewrites. Not sure I can recommend this process for anyone, though. I curse myself every time I get into revisions. Haha.

    @SuzeTalks@SuzeTalks3 жыл бұрын
  • I just tell myself "use as many hyphens as you want" and the rest comes naturally... Very badly, but quickly!

    @user-qv2qf1jk5o@user-qv2qf1jk5o3 жыл бұрын
    • Oh my god, YES. I thought I was the only one. I've been told so many times that using a hyphen as a sentence break should be a rare occurrence, once a paragraph at most but I'm just constantly writing hyphens. I would always have to go back, and rewrite the same sentence over and over again trying to get it right--but things go much faster with hyphens for me, and then I just remove them later.

      @iferawhite7661@iferawhite76613 жыл бұрын
    • When I began the first draft of my debut novel a couple months ago, I told myself to just let it be bad; I wasn't gonna be able to get all my research into all at once (which I'm still doing), and it's all gonna be revised anyway. All in all, I'm just glad to have a pile of pages stacking up on my desk. Can't wait to have it done, but I'm enjoying the process.

      @mackfarlainethebarenakedau5113@mackfarlainethebarenakedau5113 Жыл бұрын
  • Here I was thinking I was just a really bad writer/drafter (I'm currently writing my first novel). It's so encouraging to know that what I'm doing is ok. Thanks for the confidence boost and extra tips!

    @xhellocoldworldx@xhellocoldworldx3 жыл бұрын
  • Dirty drafting is my favourite part of the process, I think of it as if I’m producing thumbnail sketches when I’m planning a painting, lots of messy ideas, tons of crossings out, but in the end I have a complete idea of the image I am trying to present to the world.

    @runswithpencil@runswithpencil3 жыл бұрын
  • Me going into this video: "this doesn't apply to me, but I guess I'll watch it anyway." Me at everything you said: "it me, it me!" Turns out I write zero drafts! Who knew?

    @juniperwoodbury1404@juniperwoodbury14043 жыл бұрын
  • I normally write my book within a month. And write anywhere between 1-3k a day as my "goal count." Sometimes write 5k a day. Or have 10k days. But as an online college student with no part-time or full-time makes it easier for me to reach these goals. I am also a pantser so I never plot unless I am writing fantasy or a novella. But with all that being said, this was still helpful. I write "one to three sentences for each chapter as well. " I work in 10-25 minute sprints and use tea and candles to set the writer mood. This was a cool video!

    @jazmingalloway3172@jazmingalloway31723 жыл бұрын
    • Wow 10k days?! How do you manage that?! Awesome

      @sleepyllama9776@sleepyllama97763 жыл бұрын
    • @@sleepyllama9776 normally it's an all day thing. It can happen anywhere in the book and it takes a lot of focus most of the time. Think about the days you are most excited to write, and try your hardest not to let the feeling go. Also during my 10k days I like to take a half an hour break every 1k to stretch, talk over the next few scenes, (I use a voice recorder, or speak with a friend) and refill my tea if I need to. Then put on music and grind out the words. Hope you find success. Have a glorious day ☺️

      @jazmingalloway3172@jazmingalloway31723 жыл бұрын
  • I love sprint writing. Sometimes I’ll just sit on my bed and type super duper fast and later just look at it and laugh, but I find things I love within it, ideas and strings that can lead to major twists in the book. It’s super satisfying and relaxing!

    @ajm8471@ajm84713 жыл бұрын
  • Most recently, I have done a detailed outline, a deep character sketch for each main character and an "available names" list for side characters. I did a family tree for my main characters so that I could understand generational history. This helped me with what I think of as place history too. For this project I drew a map of the neighborhood and city where the story is taking place. All this prep took six weeks. After that, I wrote like I was possessed, coming in at about 90,000 words in a month-then I walked away and didn't look at any of it for six months. I'm revising now. The distance helped tremendously. Given that I do so much preparation, I don't think of myself as writing a book in a month so no unicorn here.

    @arlissbunny@arlissbunny3 жыл бұрын
    • Hey! That's utterly relatable. I m right now involved in the process of outlining. I am pretty much doing same stuff 👍

      @saadsiraj3554@saadsiraj35542 жыл бұрын
    • @@saadsiraj3554 90000 a month? Good lord. I thought 40000 a month was big deal

      @skywa7183@skywa7183 Жыл бұрын
    • @@skywa7183 I know it's a big deal, I was talking about the way he/she does the character and plot creation.

      @saadsiraj3554@saadsiraj3554 Жыл бұрын
    • @@saadsiraj3554 shoot I was replying to the original comment.😅

      @skywa7183@skywa7183 Жыл бұрын
  • I'm a hybrid of an outliner and a discovery writer. In the beginning, I'll outline a chapter. Then as I write, if something interesting sparks, I'll jot it down somewhere, hoping it'll build an interesting trait that I never knew my character had-- sort of like letting out a breath that I didn't know I was holding ... except, I'm not sure how I would feel if I typed that last statement in my manuscript. Anyway, writing sprints can be awesome! It's amazing how much I can get done in a short amount of time. It really doesn't take a lot of effort. In fact, sometimes, I'll just turn off my brain and slap words down, hoping that it'll make sense. If it doesn't make sense, I'm sure I'll remove it or edit in a way so that it does make sense.

    @AsheJunius@AsheJunius3 жыл бұрын
    • Same, that's exactly how i write. I'm currently writing my first draft ❤❤

      @anveshasachan2260@anveshasachan22603 жыл бұрын
  • I was feeling guilty about dirty drafting until you first mentioned it in another one of your videos. Within days of realizing a 'dirty draft' was alright, thanks to your video, I finished writing it through to the end.

    @roberthoople@roberthoople3 жыл бұрын
    • This comment is a dirty draft

      @roberthoople@roberthoople3 жыл бұрын
    • There's nothing wrong with drity drafting. Whatever it takes to get the framework onto the page, do it, just remember to edit later.

      @victoriacobb2370@victoriacobb23703 жыл бұрын
  • "use the word 'just' 150 times" I actually laughed out loud because of how called out I feel hahaha

    @LeahRummel@LeahRummel3 жыл бұрын
  • It helps me sometimes when im stuck to actively write badly, then go back and edit it to be better. I think it actually strengthens my writing because i end up writing directly what I'm thinking, and then more of the emotion gets through. Eg: Step 1: Whoever the hell Banksy is, i wish they'd stop painting stuff on my street. Idiot tourists clog up the sidewalk and make me late for my stupid job. Step 2: (I literally copy and paste step one and go through and change it.) Whoever the hell Banksy is, it would be nice of them to paint some walls on a different street for a change. Every morning, I have to fight my way through crowds of sneakers-and-cargo-shorts tourists who make me late for my stupid job. I always discover words or turns of phrase that i would not have otherwise liked or thought to include, and it has made my writing much stronger.

    @lauramccullagh980@lauramccullagh9803 жыл бұрын
    • I actually like the "bad" example better! It sounds more natural to me and it really sounds like how an annoyed person would describe the situation.

      @maureenp2248@maureenp22482 жыл бұрын
  • Omg this is so helpful. I honestly learn more from your videos than I do in English class😂 I’m currently working on a YA fantasy novel and so far only around 13,000 words into it. Wish me luck fellow writers!!!😇😁

    @ajm8471@ajm84713 жыл бұрын
    • how did it go? did u finish

      @cadencev5572@cadencev55723 жыл бұрын
    • @@cadencev5572 It went...decent. I have a habit of writing something pretty long and then hating it when I reread. I think I’m around 20-25,000 on it now, but haven’t worked on it in a bit.😂👍🏻

      @ajm8471@ajm84713 жыл бұрын
  • What I typically do, Is, even though my writing may end up in third person omniscient in the end, my "zero draft" (Where I just jot down notes of what I want, finding my 'voice' so to speak and finding heads and tails on life, the "what's the meaning of life" kind-of-moment as far as the story goes), is in first person where I kind of place myself in the shoes of my main character and try to figure out what the situation is even all about. Is it even an idea that is viable? Once that is out of the way and out of my head and I have a sort of understanding of what the heck I'm trying to do, then I start to tell the story in my first comprehensive draft. Why do I start by telling? Because it's concise, it's to the point. It's a matter of breaking "storytelling" up into smaller tasks. Lord knows my zero draft is anything at all but comprehensive and most people would shiver in fear if they saw it! I am a programmer and software developer by trade, and focusing on what "you know" is so ingrained in me. Focusing on what you know, getting that out of the way, and then developing things as you move along. Focusing on EVERYTHING all at once is simply the road to complete failure in my world. I've loooong ago learned that it's impossible to. For me, writing is like a mosaic... there are the really big headlines, the characters, places, key events, and writing for me is about gluing all those pieces, those mini stories, together so that it actually makes a whole and larger picture that carries a complete meaning other than just being scattered ideas.

    @TheAngelOfDeath01@TheAngelOfDeath013 жыл бұрын
    • This is somehow exactly how I feel about writing, with the difference being that I‘m still trying to figure out the process. The fastest draft I‘ve ever written was in first person, so I will absolutely try it just for the purpose of drafting now. Thank you!

      @IsabelA-hp9yt@IsabelA-hp9yt3 жыл бұрын
  • Yes, I call it a 0th draft or a bare-bones draft. I just write the components of the scene with little detail and description. Like an overly verbose outline with some dialog. Just get it on the page and then go back and rearrange and flesh out the story.

    @theatheistpaladin@theatheistpaladin3 жыл бұрын
    • That actually sounds so helpful, I might try that!

      @dreamingofmagic@dreamingofmagic2 жыл бұрын
    • This tip is going to save me so much heartache when I finish my manuscripts. I keep forgetting that knowledge is cross-disciplinary. This is JUST like a Minimum Viable Product (MVP) in tech, where you use 5% of the resources to test if something is worth creating in your ideal form.

      @omegaminoseer4539@omegaminoseer45392 ай бұрын
  • I am such a dirty drafter!! LOL I did not realize this until I had my first draft printed and handed to my closest writing friend. It has sooo many holes in it but I have particular scenes in my head. Those scenes are why I'm so motivated to write. When I see those on the page it inspires me to write more so that other can fully feel the emotions of those scenes like I do. Thanks for posting about the writing process!

    @caceymalone4566@caceymalone45663 жыл бұрын
  • I’m such a slooooooow zero drafter😅 I cant believe you get yours done in 3 months! Here I am 8 months later still working the same draft (I’m not writing everyday though) I’m going to try some of these tips and see if I can cut my time down!

    @jenailogan9195@jenailogan91953 жыл бұрын
    • Try 10 years! 😂 This year though I've decided the idea needs to get out of my head and onto paper. If it's stuck with me this long then it deserves a chance! Good luck on your journey!

      @nikkireigns@nikkireigns3 жыл бұрын
  • This gives me more confidence on just writing and worrying later

    @buckle9733@buckle97333 жыл бұрын
  • For NaNoWriMo last year, I decided to write one million words in the month (not my wisest idea), and functionally I vomited words on the page and then a story happened. For me, Zero Drafting is the tangible experience of the story where I'm there as a stenographer to my ideas and the world, and then subsequent drafts are when the craft gets involved. I did hit the million words, and since, writing fast and dirty drafts of stories has gotten significantly easier, cause I'm writing a normal volume. I also recommend a freewrite, alphasmart, or any dedicated digital typewriter for anyone who gets distracted by their computers. It's how I write the instinctual draft. Great video, as usual.

    @Nemo37K@Nemo37K3 жыл бұрын
    • _How._ How did you do that?

      @ferrin6326@ferrin63263 жыл бұрын
    • @@ferrin6326 Willpower, patience, a willingness for spelling errors and total freedom to write whatever came to mind. I also planned my days around 33k word goals. I had been writing 4k-12k a day for months prior because I was zero drafting a series I started a decade ago (I finished it on January 10th this year at 2.4 million words). I also had days where I exceeded the goal (at a max of 73k), and some where I was way below (

      @Nemo37K@Nemo37K3 жыл бұрын
    • @@Nemo37K wow. I am surprised your brain is still forming sentences. Did you take a lot of naps after all of that?

      @kaylajames9334@kaylajames93342 жыл бұрын
    • @@kaylajames9334 Lots of naps, and a week long break afterward. My brain, mercifully still functions.

      @Nemo37K@Nemo37K2 жыл бұрын
    • @@Nemo37K lol. Glad you have survived.

      @kaylajames9334@kaylajames93342 жыл бұрын
  • Can I just say that word sprints (13:00) have revolutionized my writing? It has been the single most helpful way I've found to get actual progress. Great video!

    @SethRingWrites@SethRingWrites3 жыл бұрын
    • Same here :)

      @HolziWolziWooo@HolziWolziWooo3 жыл бұрын
    • @@HolziWolziWooo Do you sprint with a group or just solo?

      @SethRingWrites@SethRingWrites3 жыл бұрын
    • @@SethRingWrites With a writing buddy, sometimes solo. Usually go for 15 mins at a time. You?

      @HolziWolziWooo@HolziWolziWooo3 жыл бұрын
    • ​@@HolziWolziWooo I really like 30 min, because I feel like I can get in a groove. Recently I've been sprinting solo, but that is getting harder so I need to get back into a group.

      @SethRingWrites@SethRingWrites3 жыл бұрын
    • Never heard of it before Natnowrimo a few years ago. It's amazingly helpful.

      @jacquig1939@jacquig19393 жыл бұрын
  • Expanding the outline as much as I can. Messy, needs a lot of work, but most of the ideas are down on paper (procesor). That is a 0 draft for me.

    @gegyte@gegyte3 жыл бұрын
  • The whole concept of dirty drafting is new to me... I used to show my chapters to my little sister (she writes exceptional fanfics) as I wrote them but it kinda stuck me on writing, because I couldn't dirty draft... Really thank you for the video, I didn't even heard about the concept of zero draft and writing sprints before see it xD

    @aquariotutu@aquariotutu3 жыл бұрын
  • I used to rely a lot on my friends approval to whom I sent my first chapters and then I would spend months ignoring the story and not writing anything. Even if they liked it I just neglected the story. I think this bad habit, at least for me, comes from writing fanfiction and getting attention and validation from readers right away. Fortunately I've been able to stop doing this, mostly because one of your advice. As an aspiring author, no one cares about your book as much as you do. You may be really happy that you achieved a certain goal and you can share with someone and they don't care. I used to get really sad because no one got happy with me. But I just embraced it and I'm now halfway through my first draft. Thank you so much for your honesty and good advice and sorry for any English mistakes, I'm a not a native speaker.

    @kayleighthedreamer3800@kayleighthedreamer38003 жыл бұрын
  • oh gosh! That moment when you realize your 5th draft is still technically a zero draft :P

    @beautye5909@beautye59093 жыл бұрын
  • I can draft a book in 4 weeks but it takes 6 months + to do all the revising and then editing. I'm slow at revising and that's the part that scares me. How do I write the draft in a month? Once I get an idea, I'll write a narrative account of what happens. It's typically 8-12 pages long. All telling with the odd line of dialogue that seems to fit. Then I leave the idea alone for months and work on something completely different. When I come back to the idea, I'll break it up into chapters, mark off stuff from John Truby's book "The 22 Steps of Storytelling" to make sure the importnat stuff is there. I'll go through the major character(s) and sort out who they are and what their conflicts are. Then, while the iron is hot and my enthusiasm is high, I strike and tackle the damn thing, with my printed summary taped over my desk. Then comes the revision. Yeah, this is where I suck big time. I've followed Susan Dennard's process and it has been immensely helpful, but despite all the above, I still find my 1st draft to be messy and in need of much revising. I figured my brain is just super chaotic. Finding videos like this and others really help because I walk away thinking, "I may have a messy process, but it's okay. I'm not alone."

    @solarsailer4166@solarsailer41663 жыл бұрын
  • Thanks Alexa! I now realise that I've been zero drafting and this makes so much sense! I had "told myself the story" but then went back to write it in a different way (different POV/tense etc). I'm going forward now feeling much more confident that I didn't make a "mistake" with that zero draft, but that it was simply my process. I'm likely to fast draft a zero draft with my current WIP too - it's just how I get it all down! Thanks again for a great video!

    @jackiemorrison2706@jackiemorrison27063 жыл бұрын
  • The zero draft is perfect for work. I pull up a word document and in between tasks at my job I can type out conversations and very basic details of a scene--then go home and layer on style and clean up.

    @writenowdream3882@writenowdream38823 жыл бұрын
  • I'm zero drafting my first novel. I am literally putting a string of scenes together so that I can show it to my CP/alpha readers to help me find the story and write more well rounded characters. Then, I'll do the rewrite for my rough draft and really get down to business.

    @MissHolliday3110@MissHolliday31103 жыл бұрын
  • Wow! Okay, I have been hitting that 80-90% wall and abandoning the work because I guess I was convinced that I had to write the entire first draft, do or die, and if I didn't the story wasn't going to work. This is a game-changer for me. Whole frame of reference for this just flipped. Thank you!

    @ginnykemerer2708@ginnykemerer27082 жыл бұрын
  • I write most of my books in about 1 month to 1½ months, and 2 things changed the game for me: 1: rewarding myself with star stickers every 500 words 2: outlining like my life depends on it I'm a very reward-oriented person. I want to be rewarded for my accomplishments no matter how small they are, and writing a whole book can take a long time which means it'll take a long time for me to get a reward. But 500 words? On a good day where I'm really in the flow, I can dish out 500 words in 15 minutes. Maybe I actually wrote 600 words, that means I only have 400 words until the next star! and BOOM! suddenly I have written 5-7000 words in a day. Outlining I do to save myself from getting stuck during the drafting stage. There are still some gaps in my outline, but nothing major. I used to hate outlining, but I realised that I hate getting stuck more and now, honestly, outlining is one of my favourite parts of the process.

    @nannasskrivehjrne9494@nannasskrivehjrne94943 жыл бұрын
    • That star reward thing is super smart. I'm gonna do that!

      @candacetaylor27@candacetaylor273 жыл бұрын
  • I was skeptical of the zero draft idea, but then realized I go back to chapters and rework and rework without any forward momentum. I decided to just give the zero draft thing a go, and it’s been amazing. I am a zero drafter and I really recommend it!

    @writenowdream3882@writenowdream38823 жыл бұрын
  • How did you know I needed this right now!? I wrote 5k words in about 3 hours yesterday and I'm excited to keep that going since I've been putting this off for 5 years. Edit: Lol that didn't last. Here I am yet again.

    @ChaoticVampire@ChaoticVampire3 жыл бұрын
  • I'm not a fast drafter but I did take the fast draft workshop for Candace Havens earlier this year and it improved my momentum significantly. Aside from that, I'm a pantser, but I use vague scene checklists, placeholders (heaven sent), an accountability partner, comic sans hack, writing scenes by hand when I get stuck (then typing/editing it) and writing sprints. 20-min comic sans writing sprints are *chefs kiss*

    @JB-ui6tm@JB-ui6tm3 жыл бұрын
  • I have done both discovery writing and outlining before. I find that 10% discovery writing and 90% outlining works for me: get most of the heavy lifting done first but allowing myself room to input something that comes to mind that works for a scene. I'm attempting to be a zero drafter but honestly, I'm a 0.5 drafter because I have a tendency to condense multiple steps into one lol, which makes writing h a r d for me. The one true tip I have for anyone zero drafting is to write down everything. This can be ideas for the story or the worldbuilding, plot points, character traits, wants and needs, the actual story etc. It's better to get it all out before you forget and so you can maintain momentum.

    @annabelho5004@annabelho50043 жыл бұрын
  • Alexa, you are just churning video after video out right now and I am living for it 👌

    @Hannah-lt4cp@Hannah-lt4cp3 жыл бұрын
  • I was learning how to plot adn realised that I plot pretty badly since I can't stick to the plan. But it turns out that I am a natural zero drafter...that was fun to discover. That helped me feel like less of an imposter and I got my zero draft completed! whoohoo! On to self edits!

    @thefriqueisin@thefriqueisin3 жыл бұрын
  • Need to submit a book that isn't written yet to a publisher who requested it and currently freaking out so this was much needed!

    @alex_danceskpop@alex_danceskpop3 жыл бұрын
  • I'm a zero drafter because I'm an underwriter. There is so much less story the first iteration that it always feels unfair to call it a first draft.

    @Itslexreads@Itslexreads3 жыл бұрын
  • Zero drafting is my specialty! I'm hoping to get my story developed eventually. I kinda suffer from overwhelm if i try to take on too much at once. Hopefully i'll figure it out somehow! Have a great day!

    @ClefairyFairySnowflake@ClefairyFairySnowflake3 жыл бұрын
  • I discovered something about this on accident. When I started, it would take me 1-2 hours to get 200 words down. Then I took my laptop to work and sometimes would have just a half hour or so and get down a lot more words. I started setting a timer on my phone in 30 minute increments even when I had more time, then one hour increments. . I went from spending 6 hours or so of my Saturday writing to get 500-700 total words on a *good* day to getting about 1000 in an hour, sometimes for multiple hours. I'm in the middle between pantser and plotter, I'll have like a paragraph of notes on chapters in something resembling an outline, then I deviate from it a lot. External pressure helps A LOT for me.

    @cassandracrozier8934@cassandracrozier89343 жыл бұрын
    • This is me. I'll spend like six hours on a Sunday and get maybe 1000 words. 😓 I'm gonna try your idea. 🤔 Thanks for the tip. 👍

      @el4242@el42423 жыл бұрын
    • @@el4242 Hope it works well for you. :)

      @cassandracrozier8934@cassandracrozier89343 жыл бұрын
  • I love you so much, this is what I needed the most right now.

    @tappkalina@tappkalina3 жыл бұрын
  • been drafting over five weeks. this tip speaks to my blood. a zero draft. absolutely genius

    @iosyntropy@iosyntropy Жыл бұрын
    • Cool - keep at it!

      @nikkinewbie6014@nikkinewbie6014 Жыл бұрын
  • Yes! Scheduling breaks is so important! You cannot pour from an empty cup

    @sassyblondewriter8239@sassyblondewriter82393 жыл бұрын
  • Dirty drafting? Hmm...filter words, adjectives, crutch words, info dump, jumbled tenses - let’s go!

    @ramonarobot@ramonarobot3 жыл бұрын
  • My advice is write awkward and fun first drafts. Get the story out in its most creative form, and this is usually found on a sentence by sentence format, a certain creativity plotting may struggle to materialise. Once you have the dirty first draft rewrite the entre thing, sentence by sentence. Now you are plotting a novel, or writing to a plot, because you are rewriting your first draft without the bad stuff and filling it with good stuff. Then what? Rewrite the entire thing again a third time. No need to refer to notes or stick to a plan, no need to feel nervous; you know this story by now. Once you finish this, contemplate if it is ready for line editing. If so, proceed. If not, do a forth draft. Once a draft has been completed that conveys your original idea and as been boosted by subsequent drafting, proceed with line edit. What does that involve? Rewrite each sentence of your story, sentence by sentence, so that each sentence is absolutely beautiful. Rule: rewrite each sentence once only or you'll forever be thinking you can do better. Do better in other books. Get this book done. Once you have rewritten each sentence, edit it for grammar, syntax, spelling ect, but cut cut cut at this stage. Rewriting each sentence prob caused word count to rise, but now you will lower it again. Done? Proced with copy edit. Done? Popceed with manuscript assessmebt, sit back, and wait to be torn apart. That's horrible, you say. That's beauty, I say. Thanks for vid 😉

    @socman002@socman0023 жыл бұрын
  • Yes! I zero draft too! Only one CP reads my zero draft. Even they have a limit of how often I can subject them to it. 😂

    @akossiwak@akossiwak3 жыл бұрын
  • I have you to thank for completing my first ever zero draft (a bit below 90000 words atm) so thank you! 😊

    @islab7160@islab71603 жыл бұрын
  • I zero draft often. I consider it like outlining I. Draft form. There are times when I write the same scene from several points of view just to get a feel for it, or I take time to just interview a character to figure out motivation or how a particular event changed them. I never figure out my ending until second draft.

    @frankiesscifiobsession3660@frankiesscifiobsession36603 жыл бұрын
  • This is very useful on an issue to issue basis, such as a comic/graphic novel! Thanks, Alexa! 💜

    @KiX-K4T13@KiX-K4T133 жыл бұрын
  • I like the idea of jumping around between the most emotionally and visually compelling or consistently recurring imagery or scenes first and then connecting them up with logical minimal transitions. I fear it will turn out very "slide show" in draft 0 especially and maybe also even draft 1 (if I get there). I will go for the sufficient description and anti-passive language edits as part of draft1. I plan to use the excuse of "illustrating" when I hit writer's block ... Or who knows, maybe I will be too stressed out with the tumultuous times and resort to self-soothing gaming ...

    @annmurry8589@annmurry85893 жыл бұрын
  • I just completed my first fast draft over camp nano last month. I did most of these things just to get it done. I found that writing third person and telling myself the story was the only way to get it all out. I also gave myself Saturdays off from writing. I had only planned on writing 20k, and ended up with a finished fast draft at 50k. I am taking this week and next week off to recharge before I go in and write the nice draft.

    @LittleCornerBookNook@LittleCornerBookNook3 жыл бұрын
  • thank you for this!! it turns out I've written a zero draft!! I'm very proud of what I've done but I've been frustrated that I can't write the ending because of my "list of things I want to fix" from the beginning; I have a more specific title, theme, arc(s) than I did when I started but was beating myself up for not being able to "finish" this encourages me that I don't have to, I can go back and rewrite with more intention, and reach the end next time!! :)

    @MadailinBurnhope@MadailinBurnhope3 жыл бұрын
  • Great video! It's so true that sometimes you just need to use those crutches and get the words on the page. My zero draft was a lean 30K, and now I've doubled that.

    @danendesign@danendesign3 жыл бұрын
  • I stopped writing for 2 days because i was stressed that it wasn´t perfect, i would stop to correct the repetitive words and i just felt like i couldnt write, and after watching this video i feel so relaxed and so inspired. Thank u!

    @crisaguiar4285@crisaguiar4285 Жыл бұрын
  • I made a video on zero drafts...but your definition is a little different than mine, but That is what is amazing about writers...we are all different! We all have different steps and drafting processes. Great video.

    @TheNovelNana@TheNovelNana3 жыл бұрын
  • It's been 6 months and I still watch this video religiously.

    @tappkalina@tappkalina3 жыл бұрын
  • I used to do the "bullet points for what has to happen in each chapter". And then I found that when it came to writing, it just wasn't enough. I finished the book with it, but it felt like I was pulling my hair out, spending a lot of time staring at a blank page. Now I'm bullet pointing for each scene. It's been really interesting because I can make changes and fix some things before I even write them.

    @amy-suewisniewski6451@amy-suewisniewski64513 жыл бұрын
  • One tip I've heard a lot is to draft at first in Comic Sans. Presumably because you _expect_ something written in Comic Sans to be bad lol.

    @amouramarie@amouramarie2 жыл бұрын
  • Great post! First novel was a very dirty fast draft. Second novel was a very clean zero draft. Both are in the revision and editing phases 😄

    @havvaalexander9520@havvaalexander95203 жыл бұрын
  • I love your videos! I always feel like I've learned something by the end and can apply it to what I'm doing! Keep it up! No one teaches, explains, or clears writing confusion like you do!

    @JustBearSonoc@JustBearSonoc3 жыл бұрын
  • Do you ever take requests? If you do, could you please give us a tour of what type of books you read, that’s on your bookcase? I mainly ask because I am always curious as to the books I can not see.

    @mischiefmakerstudios9900@mischiefmakerstudios99003 жыл бұрын
  • This has been invaluable to me this month. I'm writing my first ever first draft, and as a perfectionist with an anxiety problem, I quickly learned that I had to jus let go of it being any good on the first go, or I would never finish. So I know that everything I have right now - even if the plot elements are decent - the prose is just terrible, but I needed to have it down first or I would obsess. Thank you so much Alexa!

    @alexperry8561@alexperry85613 жыл бұрын
  • I'm working on this for my second book. It's not actually fast because I'm working full time and attending college, but it helps me make the most of what little free time I do have.

    @emilyestelle7471@emilyestelle74713 жыл бұрын
  • My struggle is always against my inner editor when trying to draft fast. The best way I combat her is to either write wordsprints on my AlphaSmart neo in "timed typing" mode, which prevents the use of the backspace, or on my computer in either Wingdings/Webdings font or plain white. The objective, of course, is not to see what I'm typing so I resist the urge to correct it.

    @BethanyMacmanusBooks@BethanyMacmanusBooks2 жыл бұрын
  • EYE OPENING!

    @fatimakhalid1991@fatimakhalid19913 жыл бұрын
  • Thank you for this video! I've been interested in fast drafting for awhile now but wasn't sure where to start. It's hard not to be page perfect writer. This really helped me realize how beneficial a "dirty" draft can be. I feel liberated!!!! 💜💜💜

    @elizabethkwilks8641@elizabethkwilks86413 жыл бұрын
  • This was incredibly helpful as a first time novelist! I intend to write my zero draft almost as a screenplay: very stripped down and bare bones, then fill in all the details on my first draft. Thanks so much!

    @marcusmcmahon9650@marcusmcmahon96503 ай бұрын
  • I needed to hear this! Ty!

    @kaymcbride3321@kaymcbride33213 жыл бұрын
  • Love it! Thank you!!

    @scribblemonkey__2516@scribblemonkey__25163 жыл бұрын
  • Great tips!

    @nicolettacarlone8150@nicolettacarlone81502 жыл бұрын
  • My word sprints are all through 4thewords its changed how I write and my productivity overall I even love it shows me how many words I need daily to hit my year end goal. I'll fast draft before I start which is close to those couple of sentences per chapter i was surprised to see someone else uses that method. But now I'm going to try save the cat!

    @MariaWarrenWrites@MariaWarrenWrites3 жыл бұрын
  • This is so helpful thank you 😊

    @laurenparks9708@laurenparks97083 жыл бұрын
  • Tysm for making this video

    @absolutelycitron1580@absolutelycitron15802 ай бұрын
  • So helpful

    @brinleyowens2551@brinleyowens25513 жыл бұрын
  • Really glad you talked about this. 😊

    @breemlew@breemlew3 жыл бұрын
  • Really needed this video. Thank you!

    @annabelho7607@annabelho76073 жыл бұрын
  • I hate writing sprints. I need thinking time to visualize my scene before I write it. I find I start with stronger verb choices if I avoid sprints just to get word counts.

    @Quietcloud@Quietcloud3 жыл бұрын
  • Thank you so much for your videos, your tips are so useful! 💜

    @pani8966@pani89663 жыл бұрын
  • This came out at the perfect time. Thanks Alexa!

    @HPGunshot@HPGunshot3 жыл бұрын
  • So helpful!

    @adele2312@adele23123 жыл бұрын
  • I needed this!! Thank you for the helpful advice and ideas!

    @saltwater8705@saltwater87053 жыл бұрын
  • I love your channel so much!

    @acurrie1221@acurrie12213 жыл бұрын
  • Nice to listen to and follow

    @tulinaboruviri116@tulinaboruviri116 Жыл бұрын
  • Great vid. Loads of great advice, thank you.

    @danieljaygrossett-author@danieljaygrossett-author2 жыл бұрын
  • Something I do when writing is if I can't think of what to write, I have two documents open, one for the draft and one for randomness, and if I can't think of what to write I type phrases or whatnot in the randomness document because the act of typing keeps my brain moving for some reason and I don't lose the desire to write as fast as if i just stopped altogether 😊❤ love your videos btw!

    @KetchupCanvas@KetchupCanvas7 ай бұрын
  • This video was super helpful and motivating. Thanks for the tips!

    @Raven95@Raven953 жыл бұрын
  • I am a plotter so I use beat sheets a lot. I put my main points into the sections and then expand and expand and expand until I have what I call a 'chunky outline'. Occasionally it will have dot points in a scene, but it is usually more fleshed out. I've been writing for many years now and am still figuring out 'my process'.

    @michellesommerville8544@michellesommerville8544 Жыл бұрын
  • I zero draft using dictation :) It helps get the structure down -- and stops me from getting too fancy (and screwing things up) my first time around.

    @samuelewrites7249@samuelewrites72493 жыл бұрын
    • What program or app do you use? Would really appreciate a suggestion!

      @macybautista9719@macybautista97193 жыл бұрын
    • @@macybautista9719 Dragon Professional Individual 15! :) It's pricey but by far the best!

      @samuelewrites7249@samuelewrites72493 жыл бұрын
  • This was really good advice!! Currently fast drafting so this video was perfect timing.

    @luj763@luj7633 жыл бұрын
  • I don't rely on my alpha-reader, but if I know we will meet to read the story furtherm it always gives me an extra push. ^_^ And I need to write it all out wordy - if I try to reduce it while draftingI don't write anything at all, LOL! I've come to see it as first creating the abundance from which I can later pick the best. ;-)

    @singingsanja167@singingsanja1673 жыл бұрын
  • I only discovered your channel and videos just tonight and I've been binge watching some of them. Really love your content! Very well done Alexa

    @yasman2008@yasman20083 жыл бұрын
  • I love your videos so much. You make them so much fun while packing them with super helpful tips. Thank you! ❤️

    @fabisantiago_@fabisantiago_2 жыл бұрын
  • This video could not be more timely for where I am in my drafting process and gave me the perspective to say that I... may have actually finished my zero draft! And, as I start to go back through and do my first pass of revisions/editing, I will absolutely be applying some of these fast-drafting tips to fill in the gaps. Definitely one of my favorite of your videos, thank you, Alexa!

    @laracollins8213@laracollins82133 жыл бұрын
  • Thank you so much Alexa! Your videos are such an inspiration.

    @TheEmanuelaG@TheEmanuelaG7 ай бұрын
  • I watch some of your videos before writing and it motivates me. You are the best!❤

    @slavkajanastasukovova667@slavkajanastasukovova6673 жыл бұрын
  • This might just be my favorite of the ones you've made. Thank you! VERY helpful.

    @bestieboots@bestieboots3 жыл бұрын
  • Now I'm curious if you have a video on writing a series as a discovery writer because I struggle with that.

    @wanderingteacherbooks@wanderingteacherbooks3 жыл бұрын
  • These concepts are interesting. I completely understand. My first time participating in Nanowrimo, I believe I produced a zero draft. That thing is a mess, and I'm still trying to figure it out.😆 Thanks.

    @DeeBlaregold@DeeBlaregold3 жыл бұрын
  • So I got seriously stuck trying to figure out how to get my characters to the ending after I ended the second act, so I "zero drafted" the ending of my "first draft". Now, after the fact, I finally figured out how to fix the ending and now as I go through my draft I can properly adjust spots I left for foreshadowing.

    @megalopath@megalopath3 жыл бұрын
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